 Lizzielu 2004-03-26 . chapter 1Aw, this was great. I read a recommendation for this fic on SugarQuill, I thought it sounded really sweet!
This was a great idea, and I love how perfectly you have both Colin and Dennis down. You have a fabulous writing style, and the charictarization of Mr. Creevey was wonderful.
"Well, try to find someone else who isn't too tall or too big, but still has people listening to him. Try to be friends with him, and maybe you'll learn how it is that even we scrawny men do pretty well for ourselves in the end."
I loved this line, it was absolutely adorable and is a good reason for Colin's Harry worship!
Great story, it would be awesome if you could add another part to this, maybe Colin returning from Hogwarts?
Thanks for writing such a great story, it made my day!
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