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| iLOVEthis 2008-07-09 ch 4, | abuseGreat twist at the end! I loved the song choice too! |
| Storyteller of dimensions 2007-11-15 ch 8, | abuseReading it till 1:15AM was worth it! First think I will do when I return from school will be the sequel! |
| Airtail 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseIts great |
| digitalmonster911 2007-07-13 ch 8, anon. | abuseThree words. I LOVE IT! I can't WAIT to read the sequel. Don't stop writing! |
| digitalmonster911 2007-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseHOW DARE YOU?! YOU DO NOT LEAVE IT HANGING THERE! Oh well, guess I'll just have to go to the next part! ^__^ I really liked it AND IT BETTER KEEP GOING! I can't believe such a COINCIDENCE happended. ^__- It's getting really interesting. |
| Lori 2006-01-09 ch 8, anon. | abuseBeautiful! I absolutely love it!! The ending made me cry! aww! I just wanted to say that you're an awesome writer. |
| angelavenger 2004-07-16 ch 8, | abuseI love this story, It made my cry and it was just great! (TAKARI 4EVA!) |
| Chimiko 2003-12-25 ch 8, | abuseThis is so Kawaii! ^^;; In the end, Takari rulez all... Nuff' Said... I love this... A wonderful ending and story... I'm sorry I'm blunt about this... But there's nothing else to say... Again, this is great! ^_^ |
| Chimiko 2003-12-24 ch 5, | abuseUmm.. AAron likes Kendall... Doesn't he? It's actually really kawaii... This story is really good, I know I've said that before... I can't wait... Btw, I forgot to mention... that in Chapter 3 is it? that the first three words of Only Hope by Manday Moore flicked... I read this and the last 2 chapters with this song on.. It's a wonderful song, for the voice of a wonderful daughter of two fictional beings so perfect together there is no other comparison... You better be telling the truth when you said, 'no more Daikari'... |
| Chimiko 2003-12-24 ch 4, | abuse*Yes you are evil (don't worry, I just don't see Daikari very often in Takari fics)* Of all the things you could write about, you had to put Daikari in it... ARE YOU INSANE?!?!?! (I apologize again... I don't see Daikari very often in Takari fics... So, I was 'upfront' about it... I'm very sorry...) GREAT STORY... ^_^ I can't wait for the next file saved on my computer... I reviewed all the chapters after reading this one... And now, I'm going on... ^_^ This fic is the fic in which I've wrote the longest reviews for... Ja ne~ |
| Chimiko 2003-12-24 ch 3, | abuseUmm... Short Chapter yes. But good... Sort of... Good Story... nuff' said ^_^... Note: Yes, I'm usually this happy. But I'm just saving up my anger for the unfortunate event that happens at the end of the next chapter. |
| Chimiko 2003-12-24 ch 2, | abuse[quote]...my dad is kissing my mom on the forehead, his hands are cupped around her cheeks, her hands are resting on his forearms...[/quote] ^ That must be the cutest picture on earth! ^__^ I think that everyone who've yet read this chapter/story had just wished that some artist will use his/her creativity and draw that out. It would've been the cutest picture on earth ^_^. (Yes, I'm a Takari supporter... If you have not realized yet...) I really hoped that FF.N had actual quote tags like PHPBB and other boards... |
| Chimiko 2003-12-24 ch 1, | abuse^_^ I love this. This is a miracle of creation! ^__^ I really like what you have so far as base for the rest of this fic. It's actually really awesome that you could actually think of using the Parent's Trap storyline and manipulated at your will and use it for a Takari fic. Great usage of your creativity ;)! |
| miaow227 2003-12-14 ch 8, | abuseCUTENESS CUTENESS CUTENESS |
| Inu Star Angel 2003-11-10 ch 8, | abuselove it! |