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isabella36
2009-09-07 . chapter 21
This was a great story. I LOVE IT! My favorite couple is Draco and Ginny but Harry and Blaise are great in this story. I loved the interaction with their future self’s and their children. My favorite is Hayden because he is so much like his father and I LOVE Draco. Dorian is amazing too. He made me laugh so much. The only discomforting part was Harry being sick. You should definitely write a sequel in which they find a cure because I don’t like sad endings. He hasn’t even died and I’m already crying. I am a sappy. Well, hope you give the sequel a thought. Thanks for posting.
darksidhe42
2009-07-31 . chapter 21
Wow. Poor Harry. You made me cry. I really loved your OCs. The second generation was fantastic! Of course Tristy was my favorite. How could she _not_ be!
I thought the quest for Avalon was one of the best puzzles in fanfic. Although almost everything about the Grail was... different from how I learned it... taken as what it is, it's still an engaging mystery and a compelling story.
Thank you so much for sharing and for giving us all that time and effort!
frik1000
2009-07-12 . chapter 21
Damn this took me hours to finish but it was well damn worth it. Definitely one of the best stories I've ever read in this fandom. Great job. You are a gifted writer and should keep on doing it.
proud angel
2009-05-10 . chapter 21
i love this story!
just wonderful even if it's nearly too sad and dramatic in the end i cant help myself loving the story!
Exillion
2009-04-27 . chapter 6
I don't know about you but i decided to revisit this little story i read when i first saw this years ago.

Now there are so few Femblaise and decent one at that, coupled with just the amount of right action, adventure and a proper plot.

But you know what's funny? Elder wand, master of death could pretty much be compared to you're fandom wand of the Hermes. hehe how interesting.

You really should continue the this universe and forward the story from the future era fic. Unspeakable Harry as the Main character.

Anyway, congrats on making a fine fic.
goldeneyedgirl247
2009-04-08 . chapter 21
This was an amazing story! I really enjoyed reading it. Also, The Da Vinci Code is one of my favorite books, so I sort of guessed as soon as the Grail came into the picture and when red robes wanted Blaise in Avalon that she was a descendant of Christ and the holy grail. The ending is sort of sad. It's too bad that Harry can't play anymore! Either way, I loved it. Thanks for writing!
-GG
Brillantseeker
2009-01-17 . chapter 21
Exceptional story. Thanks for such an amazing story. I wonder how years does Harry have left. A bittersweet ending.
Godric's Heiress
2008-10-31 . chapter 21
Wow. I must say that this was an incredible story. Very very original, interesting, well written, hilarious and just plum incredible! I really really enjoyed it. I cried at the end...I read the little sequel too and I cried even more...I wish you hadn't had a sad ending, but I think that was part of what made the story so incredible, the sacrifice at the end...I loved it. Thank you so much for the incredible read. I will be adding this to my favourites list...and believe me, I don't often add stories to that list! So excellent job. It was amazing.
blueguju
2008-09-11 . chapter 21
I loved this story!! I liked the way that you made Draco and Harry friends compared to the other stories I've read where that happens. Good job with this one!!
serenity gray
2008-08-05 . chapter 21
This was bloody marvelous... but now you must write a sequel in which they find a cure for Harry...or where the kids are older that was quite entertaining in this story. your a total pro
Firecanburn
2008-07-08 . chapter 21
I remember reading this story ages ago.

It's been such a long time, I'm glad you took the time to completely finish it.

A great ending to a great story.
riskinglife
2008-07-05 . chapter 21
omg!i've just finished reading this entire story...it is absolutely incredible.well done...i'm kinda in love with it.xx
Go10
2008-05-23 . chapter 7
Just reading through your story again.

Just had to say this made me laugh: “He’s right,” Harry cut in sharply. “We’re soaked, exhausted, and in some cases full of hot air.” (about Malfroy)

lol

It's stuff like this that made me love your story the first time around.
shrouded light
2008-05-06 . chapter 14
So I was rereading this story for about the 5o millionth time and since I don't think I've ever reviewed I just wanted to say that this line of tristy's is my favorite in the whole story:
"They're dead! You've put them in a dead bubble?"
I must have a morbid sense of humor
LittleRedOne
2008-04-12 . chapter 21
I had read this story before I had an author's account and I'm not sure if I reviewed or not. So I'll do it this time around. :)

I adore this story; which is why I came back to read it again. You made your own great characters and you wrote out pre-existing Harry Potter characters wonderfully. I think you're a brilliant writer.

As for your plot, amazing. You kept it very interesting and with each chapter you left me wondering about what would happen with a lot of things. I know the first time I read it I didn't really want to stop. Even though I clearly had other things to do. It would be getting late and I'd just be like "Oh I have time for one more" which of course turned in to two or three. That's half the reason I love this story, it can keep my attention to where I just want to hole up in my room and read it; even though I've read it before.

The ending was amazing too. I like how you switched over with the 'Bridging The Gap' parts. It filled in a lot of wonderings. And the epilogue was nice. The whole Harry thing was real sad though.

Well I think I reviewed a good amount, I don't want to go over board. So I'll sum it up again by saying that I ADORE THIS STORY!

Kelly
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