Beautiful ending. I love the little bits of past you injected into the story-- It makes their relationship so much more realistic. I have no doubt that they married out of love. :)

I absolutely loved Tohma in this chapter! He's so complex, which is why I adore him so much. It's really fascinating to see his relationship with his wife, and I love the notion that he loves her, even if he loves Yuki, he loves her too. There's something so wonderful and interesting about it.

Additionally, Mika's reaction to her attempt was spot-on. That she realized what she did was stupid makes me feel a whole lot less uncomfortable with the first part. Great job!

i liked this story, its nice once in a while to see people appreiciate mika...i mean lots of people including me seem to hate her for annoying eiri and this story just made me like...kinda atleast. i liked all five...i know this is a really late review...but good job!

I loved your story...I wanted to ask you if I could use your idea for my fic...it's going to be a Tohma/Mika fic. It's called loneliness, I hope you like the fic, if you even read it. The fic is based to all Mika and Tohma authors and fans...Thanks! Happy Writing!

*sniffles* ^-^ Yeah, niceness. The plot is.. erm... "common" but the way you put those characters into their places, made it very unique! I haven't read, seen or had heard of gravitation, until very recently, but who cares. Happiness is universal ^.^ Keep writing em fics.

excellent. beautiful. 5 stars.

that was great ending, truly touching. their emotions and reactions seemed very genuine. i especially loved the ending that was just too sweet. great job!

Aww... I just love angst! You did a great job writing this and I really hope you'll maybe write more fics that's related to Mika.

very nice fic. i'm not known for being emotional, but i almost--almost cried on the tohmaXmika part. i love the guilt thingy.

“Mika, what happened?”
“I caused this, didn’t I?”

i hope you write more mikaXtohma fics. i really dig this couple.

keep up the good- the very good work.
thank you for making my day. :)
if you have another mXt fics, i'd appreciate it if you'll...uh... say, inform me about it.

ja. ^^'(oh **. 3am already. -_-')

Yes...sad. VERY sad its over...but still, it was so beautifully written! =^.^= and so sweet! I really like your writing style! I hope you write lots, LOTS more! You're definitely on my favorites' list! ...not that you care, but...yeah...^_^;
Anyway, keep up the wonderful work!

He-hey!!! That was so so so so so so so so so so so so so so cool!!! I love the fanfics about MikaxTohma!! I just love when they love each other!! It's a lot better than when he loves Eiri, cause I really hate Eiri, and Mika's much cooler and much better for my Tohma! But that's not the case! ^^- Your fic was great! Really!! I liked the Tohma part better, cause I like Tohma better, but everything was great! The end was perfect!! Good work na no da!! ^^- And if you really are writing more fics about Mika, make her have a happy ending with Tohma! They deserve it! ^^-

PS: Tohma's mine! ò.ó

This is lovely. Not sure if I believe that Mika will try to kill herself, but it works in your story.

Characterization is wonderful and everyone seems to be IC. I will proceed to read the rest of your story arc now.

It's interesting to see another Mika story that is being posted around the same time I posted mine. Mika doesn't really get a lot of spotlight in the Gravi fandom ne?

Love it. :-)

Wow.
Now that it's done, I feel confident submitting a review to you. I don't know much of Gravitation (My dealer has only supplied me with the first four or five episodes so far) but I do enjoy it. Mika is a very interesting character, so I am happy to see a story about her.
I am very impressed with your depiction of her depression. It's a very personal one, not like the detatched never-been-there-never-researched versions I'm used to reading. Kudos.
Also, I like your style. I can't give it a name, but I do like it. I'm only occasionally driven mad by the minor typo, but that's no fault of your own. Do you have a beta reader? If you'd like one I'd happily volunteer.
I don't know if it was intentional, but my favourite bit of storytelling was how you explained Mika reading Eiri's expression in the window. Then, when it would be best for her to see Touhma's expression, he's facing the window. :) Nice touch.
Do keep writing! I'm particularly fond of your author's notes.

it's over? *claps hands* i adore the mika and tatsuha sap!!! wahh!!! hoping to read more of your fics! gambatte yo!

*happy sigh*

Couldn't have ended any better. ^-^ I love how you did this, from each characters POV and building up to this conclusion. And the background you put behind Touma and Mika is magnificent. ^-^ Yay for quasi-happily married het couples! ^_~

Very nice. ^-^