Please write more. I've been checking for so many weeks to see if you've added any more to this story, becuase you've left me in curiousity as to why Sydney/Lauralda came to Lincoln and why Legolas has come to return her to Mirkwood.PLEASE,PRETTY PLEASE FINISH THE STORY. It'd give me something to read during the holidays. Anyway, i also want to say that this is such an imaginative peice of work, and very original to some of the MANY others that i've read. KEEP IT UP. Please inform me to any other stories that you may have already written. It'd be great to read more of your work. Although this story is an enjoyment to read, i become a bit lost in it all, and the story line tends to stray in the chapters 7 & 8.As a reader the reason as to why Legolas is in Lincoln, or how Sydney/Lauralda is an elf and ended in Lincoln in the first place etc. tends to bounce back and forth throughout the chapters of the story. In addition some of the parts in certain chapters tend to linger on when not necessay and this can cause a little lost in interest.I'm giving you helpful advice in order to improve and create a masterpeice of a story, so please do not get angry or have a sad at me just for trying to help you out.Plus, i'm pretty sure i know as an advanced TEE student, different aspects of the story that need some help on. However,i don't want to lecture or seem as though i know exactly what is to be worked on, because this is YOUR peice of work and not mine. I HOPE that i've given you a little bit of extra help.Otherwise an excellent attempt, despite a bit of confusion in the chapters with the central part of the story.I'm looking forward to reading onwards from chapter 8, and to see you've taken a bit of my helpful criticism on board.
Thankyou for taking the time out to read this.You don't have to consider anything that i've written because the choice is TOTALLY up to you.
Will write again soon.
Yours Faithfully
REENA.

are you going to update?

hee hee, what's up with peter? he seems like a really funny guy, but how old is he? (i mean wanting to act like a chaperon and all? lol) and why does she always seem to be getting sick? she's NOT pregnant right? i mean they haven't.done anything! =) lol. please keep writing! i really want toknow how this will all end (and legolas is a really sweet guy here. very.proper boyfriend material =) hee. lol

This is great! I first read it in like Sep. and it was the 1st fanfic I ever read! GASP! I was reminising (spelling!!!) and decided to read it again and see if you added anymore chapters BUT YOU DIDNT! THERE IS NO EXCUSE (OK unless you died) SO YOU SHOULD UPDATE RIGHT NOW! IM STILL WRITING IN CAPS LOCK ARENT I? O. much better. its a great story; mary sueish but i like them and this is a good one. so what about culture shock? leggy is smart,ok? lol write more!!!!!!

i really liked your story! i skipped dinner to finish reading it. it's such an interesting storyline and there are definately not enough of guys like legolas to go around. the only thing i was wondering while reading your story is how could she know about legolas? how could tolkien know this whole other world existed and write with such detail about it or is it purely coincidental? i think it would make your story interesting to have tolkien visit middle-earth and come back to write the story or something. maybe he was frodo in the fellowship. frodo ends up leaving middle-earth in the end of return of the king. i thought it would be cool to mix the two stories like that. just an idea- please hurry with the next chapter because i'm anxious to read it!

-brittany:)

this is really......... GREAT!!!!!!!!!!! please contibue, but i gotta ask, is she gonna die?

Caffeine make everyone go crazy especially me

this is good, i'm glad i FINALLY got to read at least chapter 1

Aww... that was so sweet! And oo... Leggy will probably feel more "at home" at a Renaissance fair! Oooo... YAY! :) PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update sooner!!!!!!!! Ai, *pout* for me?! LOL!!!! :)

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Ithink that the story is great. Though it'd be better if there was more romance and a few more charters. It'd be good if Sydney came back to Mirkwood with legolas and married him. Then it'd be my favourite, or one of them fanfictions

That was funny. They don't need a chaperone. They are two grown adults. Really good chapter. Please keep posting more chapters.

OMG! Please add more soon! I love this story! It's soo unique!!!!! Keep it up!

Oh my gosh, that was so incredibly funny!!!!!!! Peter kills me! KILLS ME!!!! Ai, you can write *jealous*

Don't worry about this being a Mary Sue or not. I like it just fine--continue!