nice story, update please.

hau! must have chapter 10 asap! *bangs head on desk from boredom*

love your story !!keep writting and update soon please i can't wait to see what's gonna to happen at tifa

Very nice work...I'm a little skeptical about the pairing, but good work none the less. Keep writing, and PLEASE dont stop writing this Fic. It's...interseting! I LIKE IT!

Oh,and btw,this is one of the greatest SepTi fics i've read..total reward for SepTi fans(others miGHT think this pairing is odd..but itz the coolest X33)..and you're right again,..sadistic love fits SepTi( i think..;3

Love 'tis fic!the story is on deep observation on each char's feelings on my POV..but it was very good!i hope it further emphasizes the part (if!)sephiroth develops love for the very sexy Tifa (..IF!)

great ficlet so fair, I was abit disappointed thought that seph didn't do the did but jenova took control of his body and did it. Can't wait to see this continued, hopefully tifa can heal sephs corrupted mind while seph gives her a place to belong. I hope in the nxt lemon scene (I hope there will be) seph will be the one in control, at least as controlled as he can be with that extra boost of testosterone. Great work anyway and looking forward to the nxt chapter.

What a great story. I know you've been working on your other fics, but please update!

pleaz write more, ur story is too good of a plot to stop. if you do, ill never review any of your other stories.

and thats final

Very interesting...and nice portrayal of Sephiroth :)

Update!

i really like it. I think i like it so much because it wasn't really what i was expecting and so it got me more hooked into it. then again, i love all the stuff that you write! lol, well at least the ones i've been able to read. good job! hope you update soon.

Hi. I'm surprised a Aerith and Sephiroth fan-writer writes a Tifa and Sephiroth story. To be quite honest with you, your work is bit questionable. Now, i know this is only your second chapter and i give you props and preps for a good works done, but alot of things are left open and somehow sprawled for debating upon. Firstly, Cloud, though drunk in the first chapter uses too much logical anger. When you're drunk, one stutters, jerks, wobbles and gets all flop! But he speaks rather--clearly, angrily, continuously, and here is the fun part, everything Tifa tries to reckon with, he somehow has "sense" to deny is true by giving a reason. Now, thats not something you find in crazy drunk ppl like that. The odds of that happening is rare. The other thing is, i realized because you're an Aerith writer, you make her very predominant, her character is more somehow powerful than the main female. You negate Tifa's character a great deal, and you emboss Aerith's character alot. And the other thing is, you mentioned in chapter one most Tifa and Sephiroth stories are sadistic. Perhaps, that's true to an extent, but i dont think you should say thats blasphemy because the idea of Aeris and Sephiroth is just as crazy, for goodness sakes he stabbed her and killed her. I think Tifa and Sephiroth are more possible than Aerith and Sephiroth. He killed her and it never crossed the plotline or the creators story that he regretted, but there is rumoured that Sephiroth did want to rape Tifa, and though it doesn't say he liked her, it said in some crude, rotten, nasty way he was potentially attracted to her.

If you're going to make a story with Sephiroth and Tifa, please, see her for her best character and her most beautiful character. If your story was an aerith story, then make it one, but dont make false pairings and crude sayings, because of ppl play with Tifa in the game, and she's pretty good.

I'm just a fan...so plz, be a little open minded to her character. Thanks.

bye

update

I really want to see what happens next so UPDATE