Good story! The end to this chapter made me laugh.

loved it

update soon this is freakin awsomw

yeah! this is amazing. I'm in love with Tim. If he was real and not a comic chara. we would have issues because I wouldn't leave him alone. Don't worry I don't like the spoiler either, she's just anoying.

I really liked this story and wish that you would update soon. I don't see why you stopped writing such a great story. I'm putting it in my c2 archive and ading you to my author alerts.

Cool story! Go Robin! Feel sorry for him when he's just Tim and has to fake being normal. Hope there is more to this!

hah! great!
I loved it. considering the update date is sometime in 2002, can I venture to guess that you don't plan on updating any time soon? *sigh* You really should. This is a good story. Now I'm going to go read your other stories... and just because I doubt I'll review again today: I'm sure your other stories are awesome. so great job. I might fave you.

I really loved this, please write more! Please?

You do that Robin point of view thing rather well! I loved it!

"Umm, Nightwing, I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but it's been open season for awhile now. Y'know, like since you were 8?"

Riot, simply rib cracking riot.

Wow, you're good at this! Wish I could write like you, but there you go. Email me, and I can pick your brains...

this is a great story and i hope you will continu!!

Great story! I think you did a wonderful job of delving into Tim's personality, as well as Oracle's and Nightwing's. I very much look forward to the next chapter, though I'm unsure where the story is going to go from here.

very nice finish. I think. Than again, at the end of Chapter 2, I thought it was gonna be over.
I like the way you have Tim view nightwing. Very awe-istic, just right for thier relation. A nice happy ending while being truthfull to the comics.

And you don't think we'd like a 30 page chapter?;)

I realy enjoy your work. I'd love to hear how one of the "stratergy sessions" went; we see so much of "Batman and co. fight the villian of the hour" and so little of how they prepair. Beyond that having Bruce, Dick, Tim and, maybe, Babra together in one room could be... intresting.

Fantastic story. I think you really nailed Tim's POV and it had equal parts action and humor. One bit of constructive criticism though: you started switching your tenses, from present to past and back again, which is a bit distracting. Keep an eye on that in the future and you'll be golden! I'll definately be looking foward to more work from you.