This is an excellent story! Aside from the grammatical errors, I kind of want to see what happens with Peroth n' K1, also Skuld and Urd.

Aside from the grammatical errors, I loved it. :)

Some of the sentences seem incomplete and others placed in odd ways. The fic was dark as promised and I must say, you wrote it well. I'm sad that belldandy fell but relieved that keiichi will heal and move on. Good work and good luck to you and your future stories.

You weren't kidding when you said this was a dark fic. I liked it anyways, the writing was well done.

Thanks for the great story!

Aedan

Belldandy, while drunk on Coca Cola, once said that, given the choice, between saving the world Keiichi, she'd save Keiichi.

This was a wonderful tangent to that aspect of her character, a rare glimpse of the contrast that must exist in Belldandy, but also keeps her love for Keiichi intact to the reader. He's all she wants. He is her world, regardless of what she becomes.

Merci beaucoup. I felt privileged to read such a well-done story on the possibilities of what might happen when the Good goes Bad in desperation.

I'd ask for a sequel depicting Peorth and Keiichi... but somehow, I'm satisfied with this ending. That's a rare thing.

Thanks again.

Masterfully executed and overall beautiful.

A decent fic so far. There is always room for a dark fic, even if just to help us appreciate the light ones more.

I would have killed you. The only thing that keeps me from doing it is that Belldandy wouldn't approve of my doing it.

That's the most shittiest piece of junk I ever read. It seems that you are very unhappy with this life and have to make everybody as miserable as you. Go out get a girlfriend, try to better your sorryass ruinous excuse for a life.

Ah! Very awesome story! This is indeed very dark, but I don't know why, I like it! Goodjob, good job!

But the ending is a little sad, since I don't favor Peorth/Kei. Poor Bell-chan. It's understandable that she fell to the Dark Side of the Force due to her possessive love for K1.

You earned my place, sir. Keep up good job!

CSI

what a wonderful story,it's so sad that Belldandy went mad but the ending was great.

Very dark indeed, but the sad thing is I can picture the downfall of Bell if she was never able to meet Keiichi again.
She truely loves him and has proven so many times. Her jealousy and anger in the manga at certain points proves she might do something drastic just to be with him again if they were ever seperated.

I wish that Belldandy had recovered instead of engaging in rape and murder.

Wow...i gotta say that this fic was REALLY dark, yet it still is one of the best OMG fics i have ever read.

The whole Belldandy raping Keiichi thing, i really don't know if i should laugh my ** off our be horrified, i mean...WHAT A SIGHT!

Keep it up!

Err... ouch. What can I say. A few minor grammatical errors here and there.

::Mouth flaps open and close...Echo passes out::
::Echo regains conciousness::
Ok, first, well done, great dark fic.
Second, for THAT scene in Ch. 7 you are going to pay...dearly.
But other than that I really thought this was well written, good angst, etc.
But you better change addresses...