Your story is very interessting to read, I realy enjoyed it ^__^. I only want to say that is really cute how Severus describes Remus, so Romantic, but at the same time so dark (shiver & grin). You must know I like slashes very much ( I would not read them if not ^^)and I want you to know that I had a really lovely time reading your story ;)
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Your Lucius ^^

Cute, I liked it :)

Poetic and a well drawn picture of snape, that's quite amazing. Keep up the good work!