Your story and battle scenes are done well, aside from the few spelling mistakes that I noticed. Even if Leena lost the finals, she has not lost the respect of her present and past teammates.

Speaking of teams, my guess would be Rebirth since it fits Vega's, Sara's and Leena's situation perfectly.

I do hope you can finish this.

Is Leena's team name Rebirth? I love this soo far.. I can't wait for you to work with it more. Don't keep us in too much cliff hangger, or you may just loose a reader... But I love it!

PLEASE UPDATE! IT HAS BEEN FOREVER SINCE 2/14/04 (YOUR LAST UPDATE, OVER TWO YEARS AGO) ! i FOUND THIS TORY A FEW DAYS AGO AND i REALLY WANNA HEAR THE END, PLUS, WAY TOO MANY PEOPLE FORGET THEIR FICS!

I'm too bored to log in but I love the fic and you should do the side story if you haven't already.

For one great story and to make this thing end right you should have Vega's team join the Blitz team so that Leena has no choice but to return.

good stroy

is Leena on team Rebirth?

Heyzees. I have to say I luv the story. It so cool. I am really sorry that I haven't reviewed a single chapter. Gomen. But don't worry I have read all of the chapters. And on the team Leena is on I am guessing is... dum dum de dum REBIRTH! YAY! Good story. Keep up the good work (and by good I mean super good). Update soon.

Your fellow writer,

Sweet Bliss

*sigh* your never going to update, are you?

cool!
I love it

cool!
I love it

cool!
I love it

cool!
I love it

cool!
I love it

Hey, Sakura Scout, that chapter was great, even if it was a little short. Also, this battle has a good more detail than the previous one. I'm already in suspense on the next chapter on whether Leena wins or not. Can't wait to see how it ends and how Bit will react when Leena gets back to the base. See ya later.
PS: I have started to write Fanfiction, too, and I would like your opinion on my story if you have time. Please?