Ok, odd ending. But it was funny, lol
Do you do fanart to? Because I think I've seen pictures like this.

What the hell was that for! Hahahahaha
It made me laugh though...
Well, anyway it was a great idea

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omg I hate how you keep ending all your stories like this! Yes I am the same SarifinaFilth that e-mailed you a couple minutes ago. Also, if you havent checked, I emailed a deviantart person with the same name as you. He commented on saiiko's Brotherly Love comic, I'm assuming thats you seeing as though you wrote a story on that. CHANGE YOUR ENDINGS! THEY ARE ALWAYS THE EXACT SAME EVERY TIME!

Woah woah woah, WAIT. So, this story had a smart and clever plot, was fantastically written, great details, and an ending that had me on the verge of tears, but it turns out to be a plot for a show/movie?! ...AWESOME. It kinda made me a little mad, but I love this story so much. This story earns a favorite in my book.

the story was great, then you had to make the ending as it was... oh well. anyways, I know about the comic book version, and saiko said hhe was going to make it a little different, so all I ask is that the ending gets changed. mario should get mega revenge or something. Please?

Okay I so love this story and I love the illutrations saiiko did on Deviant art. Omg you guys rock like seriously!

XD I saw the comic of this story on DA and figured I'd look it up on FF. Love it, good ending. XD Although unexpected.

... That's it? AHAHAHAHA!! HUGE WTF AT THE END!! LOL I'm still reading this on DA, but I stumbled here and I read the ending which is a complete success! This is SO goin' on my favs.! LOVED IT!!

This is one of the few stories that actually got me to belly laugh.

“First you sneeze, then you fart, and then you can’t stop blinking? This is taking forever! You can’t stop blinking for just ONE minute?”

Actually I think this is the only story that could get me to belly-laugh!

It started out funny, the middle part was amazing, and the last part started out amazing and ended making me laugh so hard my fingers were shaking as I was writing this!

It is so well written! Perfect amount of dialogue and description! I...just...love...it! And since I love Luigi angst, and I like humor too, this was just perfect!

(I hate you for this.)

No seriously I don't, but it was just... so... FUNNY! VERY anti-clematic, but that's what made it what it was.

Its been done before I do admit, but the way you did it was simply hilarious. And I'm glad Luigi didn't end up dying, and I'm glad he really didn't get turned into a Bowser.

Spot on! :P

I was all said, 'cause I thought my favorite character was going to DIE! And then you pull this brilliant twist- I love it. Especially when the director lists all the other things he did wrong.

Wow, You really should of ended it at CUT, although it would suck if he died, it did not seem like a good ending, and oh yeah, they say cut and it has the stupidest ending, DO NOT READ THIS!1

Pfft! XD Gotta say, I didn't see *that* coming! Kind of anticlimactic, but better than Luigi dying! Good story, though--melikes!

Could you put up the real ending to the story?

...I'm stuck between yelling at you for the ending, or thanking God that Luigi wasn't dead...

Yeah the pet shop thing is hilarious...but, man, LUIGI kidnapping Peach? Never thought I'd see THAT.