haha...clever lily! way to show them!

heehee, that was cute!

I loved it, especially Lily and Remus. I'm afraid I don't act quite as much like your Lily as I should, but you've got her spot on. Thanks for this,
-E

lol, i like it. yes, i like it very much.

That was such a sweet fic! I like it.

Aw I loved this. It was so cute. I loved how you had lily get them back at their own little prank. Great write.

that's really cute. i think i may have reacted the same. not my parents though...

I enjoyed it very much and found it a very refreshing change.

Lady F

Hahaha! I got a link to your profile from a friend of mine, and she's correct, you are a great writer! I love this story, it's simply hysterical. :)

I love it! The hair color trick is so cliched it's not even funny but you turned it into something laughable in this one. I always imagined Lily something like that, and I love your potrayal of her! I suggest using HTML to format your document, but the story was excellent.

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Leeanna

Cute, very cute...

I could see the whole thing playing out as I got less than a quarter of the way through but, it realy doesn't matter... because if people didn't put their ideas into stories then... I would be one unhappy person right now. *smiles*

Thanks again.

That was great! I haven't read alot of Lily/James stories, but him changing the colour of her hair seems to be a common prank. I just don't get why him doing this has become something of a fanfiction cliché. Anyway, great way to put a fresh spin on the scenario.

go Lily! :)

ShadowStar

I really enjoy your writings in the Maurader era, in particular the interaction of the four boys. You vinnettes are very well written and I would very much enjoy seeing a longer length story. I think your strongest points in these stories are the characteristics/dialogue of the characters. Although we don't know a whole lot about the Marauders, we have had enough of an introduction that many peoples depiction of these boys seem out of character. I've left a review on Schnoogle for Lightening Letters, but I must say again that was the most poignant and emotional story I've ever read.