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| Katarik 2005-05-27 ch 9, | abuseThis is quite possibly the creepiest thing I've ever read, and I am including Poe and Lovecraft in that list. *shudder* Sakurazukamori!Subaru is the most insane character in X, and I commend you on capturing that in his internal monologues. |
| shinzona 2004-08-31 ch 9, | abuseHow people keep feeding on the Sumeragi to create angsty and dark atmosphere is impressionable. Well he's the source and object of torment, né, with potential almost radiating around him. - A true and pure martyr - And most of all, Suby's quite surpassing X's other famous characters in that matter, if you ask me. I don't recall any other persona with such an exploited mind and soul. Well, Subaru did have a manga analysing his psyche, so it's quite evident he's so sickly popular. Light turning into all shades of grey...Clamp's wicked concept. Bluntly, 'i was rambling earlier, gomen', next chappie please. I somehow wonder if you're following the Asuka's plotline. In fact, I'm repelling all kinds of spoilers concerning after X18 *cries, just a few more months* I didn't see any disclaimer, maybe i didn't read it. Dunno. Oh well, keep up with writing 'alternate scenarios'. I would more enjoy your story with an ending. 'smile' |
| Inverse-chan 2004-07-14 ch 9, | abuseThis is an increadibly good fic, and I'm surprised that you haven't gotten more reviews than this. I hope that you choose to continue this, and I wonder how it will end. Please update ASAP! ^-^ |
| Kia Vail-Kagami 2004-06-19 ch 9, | abuseAww, ain't ** around with Subaru's psyche such a nice thing? Unually I don't even use such words, but it seems to be the only way to describe it... No complains here anyway, I'm very much in love with this fic and can't wait to read more. Please update! Your writing style is leaving an imression on me! |
| 0animatic0 2004-02-05 ch 9, anon. | abuseT-T Update! Kudusai?! T-T Poor Subaru-kun! |
| 0animatic0 2004-02-05 ch 3, anon. | abuseWAI! I've only read the 1st and 2nd chapters but this is an awesome fic! Now, off to the other chapters! ^^ ::glomps you:: |
| Katalyst019 2003-10-24 ch 9, | abuseThis is a lovely story :O I hope you continue it! |
| yamatoforever 2003-05-20 ch 6, | abuseSo Fuuma killed Kusanagi. It was a cruel game of him to put the body there ne? Just so Fuuma! It just a little different you know that Subaru didn't appear. But perhaps it was because Fuuma didn't want to kill Karen yet. Oh well, I'm just gonna read the new three chapters right now. I'll review later. |
| Seven Broken 2003-05-17 ch 9, | abuseWAU. O_O Yummy Subaru angst and depressed Kamui! /AND/ DEATH. I think I fell in love. ;_; *latches onto* >_>! DAMN GOOD. |
| yamatoforever 2003-05-13 ch 5, | abuseArgh, evil Fuuma! To make Subaru killed a little child like that! Subaru must be suffering. And everyone would look at him as a traitor, a bad guy while he was risking his own life to save Aoki's wife. You know, I can't think about the ending. There're would be no happy ending for Subaru since he would never forgive himself to kill people. I have a feeling that he would be the one who die in the end. Oh well, I'm just gonna read the two chapters that I have missed. I'll review later. |
| ~Apple~ 2003-04-29 ch 5, anon. | abuseOh... Subaru the Sakurazukamori, Subaru the child-killer... it's so sad I like this story a lot. Looking forward to the next chapter |
| hokuto-chan 2003-04-24 ch 5, anon. | abuseVERY great story, so interesting. PLease continue!Its so errily dark & depressing & sad.but perfect characterization. i mean subby chan is not pure evil, and karen & aoki are more than friends but not much more & sorata will always make jokes& be comforting. you capture all the charecteristics everyone else tries to.cant WAIT to see what you do with this.so good. please keep WRITING!(or i'll send eviljerk!fuuma after you!^~ |
| Edam 2002-10-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseWah... that was so, so nasty. Good characterization, interesting premise. Perspective.1 is a little confusing though (too many "he"s). But do continue, I'd really love to see more of this. |
| Steffi Anderson 2002-10-21 ch 3, | abuseWow! This is great! Please continue ^^ |