I like your version better. -

me like alot. this story should have been a scene in the anime i would have wanted more g/v at the look out when gohan returned. good job please never stop writting

Nice. What we all look for in fan fiction, something to make us feel good about ourselves.

AW!

Hehehe, very sweet.

Very lovely story. But please, can you reply to this review telling me the episode number when they were reunited? I've been trying to find out for a long time but no luck. Please help me out.

And once again, your story was great!

Great Addition. I always did feel that her just pounding his chest while crying was not enough.

CUTE!

This would have been better if there were actual quotation marks through the whole story, but it looks like you lost all of 'em about halfway through (which, I admit, makes me want to stab my eyeballs out with a pencil).

But despite all that, it was really cute. Too bad the anime didn't do something more like this. :)

SUWET! that's... That's all I have to say...

Nyawness to the n-th degree! That was beyond incredibly sweet! _ Absolutely darling little ficlet, and I love how you wrote Gohan and Videl, and particularly how you conveyed his sweet and shy nature.

Absolutely lovely! _

AW

This was soo nice!

How cute! Your one-shots are awesome. This fic was so adorable. I love Gohan/Videl pairings. You are such a good writer! Keep writing great stories.

Great fic! LOVED IT!

Cute story!

AHH! Another sweet story! *gushes over the love* Gohan and Videl are my fav DBZ characters and couple! *laughs* I thought there was also going to be an engagement, but we all know that comes later since the two only confessed their love for each other. ;) Once again, fantastic work!

P.S: I hope I'm not a burden with the sudden reviews on your other fics. ;;