i liked it. and i like that you've returned with some motivation to complete your other fics. buena suerte.

Nice to see your still alive down under!

;-)

A very appropriate ending given the circumstances in this story!

I hope to read more of your new stories soon!

Dennisud

Better evening that never eh.? XD good end for a moment I thought that it was asuka that he died xD

I feel you Bucky. I have not touched Moving On in ages, and now ive taken up the helm of The Orphaned Shinobi for SulliMike23 and i have to bring myself to watch the last two/three arcs of the first season of Naruto (before Shippuden, like the last two or three seasons before the filler really started), to get the fight scenes accurate. Not to mention my Rping skills have suffered lately.

..This one always was my favourite. Its still as good as I remembered it...

Am a little disappointed to find it not finished. It was always so good, still is. Interesting that I can pick up on some spelling errors now, must have grown slightly smarter since I last read it.

I hope you don't mind me teling you it's good, reviewing it persay. I also hope you don't mind me reading it and I hope it doesn't effect the continuation of it in a bad way, because I've wanted to see the end for a long time..

great job, hope u'd finish it

FINISH IT! PLEASE!

I want to see happy Ikari's having a B-B-Q with the Suzahara's! BTW, great story. Loved it! T

Great story.

I wish you'd finish it.

finsih the story will you dude i just found it its cool but like i say to everyone if you start finish it

You know, I am really surprised that Keel is such an idiot, and STILL underestimates the Ikari men. One would think that he would make very sure of Shinji, given that he single handedly stopped third impact short of what SEELE wanted, or what Gendo wanted. That and the most surefire way to make anyone manifest any powers or abilites that they have is to threaten thier life or thier loved ones. It ususally ends in a quick and painful death for whoever did the threatening. The finale should be intresting.

Knowing you probably wont read this...

Your writing, is as awesome and I always thought it was while we were going out. Your stories and your creativity is totally cool. And I STILL love your stories. (But that doesn't mean to stop writing or anything just because I love them) Because seems like ltos of people like your stories and your doing an awesome job at them.

Keep it up kiddo.

I have been reading this from the start of the first chapter a few days ago and I love it and I hope you continue with it soon becouse I'm diing to see the interaction between Shinni and his dauther.

dude this fic is mad... wat r u doing.. keep writing! cant wait!

Welcome back.

I can't wait to see more, more, more... and more.

Welcome back. )

Richard