I loved this. Awesome story!

So what's Black going to do? hehehe, he obviously wasn't expecting that, and I bet he separates them. Unless he did know... then he'll just be Black. But it's good you used him.

:)
Shadow

Woah...for a minute there I thought you'd finally gone completely morbid on me...Fantastic story! I adore the way you write! I read Pledges and just fell in love...Plan on more reviews from me in the near future!

~Kei

I liked it. it was simple,moving and well written. i would have liked it even if the end was sad. thats how much i liked it. keep up the good work

This is awesome. I really thought Harry was dead for a second. wheww...I really like the banter between Harry and Severus. I always like the banter you play between them anyway. I always think love should have a familiarity about it...and you definitely capture it with your dialouge.

Good Story.

Beautiful, and nearly heart-attack-giving :)

*gasp* ooh, i've read this before but apparently didn't review...lovely work, it's gorgeous and pretty and sirius is hilarious.

ah, a feel-good story *smiles* but you NEED a Beta! Seriously, the mistakes distract from the good stories

You really need to find a beta reader. The story is good, but the grammatical errors are distracting, for myself and many other readers, I'm sure.

This fic is awesome and lovely and goes to my favorites.

Xcuse my awful English.
I like your story. It's a little disturbing and very ambiguous. I don't like slash, in most of novels, but I love ambiguous.
When you read you can think about two lovers, or you could think about a father and a son.
Many fanfic have Severus- father and Harry- son: doesn't matter is Jemae Potter was father or not. Severus has father's role - sometimes it is true, but Harry or Severus or both keeps their secret.
So you could read the fiction also without slash. Keepin' point of wiew of a Severus ( secret father) and Harry ( secret son ), the story works on!

Short but a very interesting way to convince Sev that there were worse things than going public with their relationship.

Bravo! Bravo!
you need a BETA.

*sigh* Just what I needed tonight to make me feel better. Lovely story.