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| GuesssWho 2008-06-21 ch 15, anon. | abuseAnd I suppose we know what dinner will be . . . |
| Dr Facer 2007-11-12 ch 15, | abuseIt is a rare thing that I read a story in one sitting,but yours was interesting enough that I had to see how it ended. I'll admit that I had hoped for Graham to win this. Not in redeeming Starling or capturing Lecter again of course, but at least in managing to drive the Doctor and Clarice to South America and earning some emotional peace at last. Then again, after reading the epilogue, I don't think Graham will get more peace that that. Nice little story, good work. |
| JAVERT IS A PIRCKLY PEAR 2005-06-02 ch 15, anon. | abuseAH EXCELLENT LOL I THOUGHT WILL DIED A LITTLE EASY BUT THEN AGAIN HED BEN DYING THE WHOLE TIME NO? :) LOVED IT KEEP IT UP |
| Bluezenith 2005-04-14 ch 15, anon. | abuse*steeples fingers together and laughs evilly* Excellent.. seriously though, great bit of writing. :-) |
| DarkShadow1 2002-11-03 ch 15, | abuseThis was one of the most interesting pieces I have ever read. it was wonderfully put together and I enjoyed it to no end. Good job. |
| troesnaja 2002-11-03 ch 3, | abuseI like it! |
| troesnaja 2002-10-26 ch 2, | abuseAH yes all these little details... |
| troesnaja 2002-10-26 ch 1, | abuseHey very cool beginning sofar just curious how the relationship between Claire and Hanni will be and how Claire will react to Wil. The situation between Will and Jack was realistic too! Just a little bit short but ah well still 14 chps to go! |
| Cyranothe2nd 2002-10-22 ch 15, | abuseVery very good. I liked the charecterization, especially the climax with Will's charecter. I think you hit the nail on the head with his motivation...fear. It's all about how much he is afraid to be like the killers he profiles. Clarice never experienced that, only a sense of duty. As I said, very interesting. |
| Saavik 2002-10-21 ch 15, | abuseLOL! awesome story! ~S~ |
| Olethros 2002-10-20 ch 15, | abuse*shivers again* I needn't tell you again how much I enjoyed this, but I will anyway. Chilling, delicious, angsty stuff. P.S. You actually made me sign in! Take a bow. ;-D |
| DevilsChick 2002-10-20 ch 1, | abuseI loved the story it was a very original ending. I can't wait to read more of your story's! |
| Screaming Lamb 2002-10-19 ch 14, | abuseWow - that was great, very realistic and you did a fantastic job with the dialogue - I don't recall any lecterfic with such excellent, well done dialogue like this! Bravo! :-) |
| luna8 2002-10-18 ch 14, | abuseThis is one of the best pieces I have read in a long time! The characterizations are so accurate and the plot so likely it almost seems like Harris wrote it. Thank you for posting this and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. luna. |
| Hanniballover1181 2002-10-18 ch 14, | abusethat was great. thank you truly |