Dude, are you ever going to update this or what? Its been over a year!

hey this looks good heh you know if you could in someway mix up all the roles that would be REAL intersting

Not a bad way to start, so far it sounds pretty interesting although a little short. But I shouldn't talk, several people pointed out that my story's chapters were too short also.

Pirotess as a Lady of Marmo and Ashram as a elf? Sounds very cool. I will have to watch out for updates.