I love this story I have been reading a lot of other one I found out that all the freedom fights have been roboticize and amy was not in other story but there is one that hasn't been roboticize his name is manic.

Wow that was epic... There is a lot of people (like yourself) that keep there talent to them selfs (in this case story righting) and I think they should just say "hay world I am a excellent story righter and I am proud of it" but people are afraid of what the crowd might say so ya if you become a story righter I think you may be better than j.k Rowling!

Interesting story plot.

Though I have 2 issues about it.

First of all, I don't believe Sonic would ever be that cross with Amy. True, she gets on his nerves, but I just don't believe its in Sonic's nature to be cruel to a little girl, even if she did deserve it.

Secondly, Mecha Amy Rose found Knothole and conquered the Freedom Fighters a little too easily. Yes, I know she's robotic, but Sonic and the others should have been able to fend her off, at least temporarily.

Other than that, I like this story you wrote.

this story is awsome. if you are still making fan fictions i think you should try to make more storys like this one. i couldnt stop reading this because once i got into this story, i just couldnt get out. i hope to see more stories like this from you. Sonicsuperfan23, signing out. ;-)

Great story! I'm a little disappointed in Amy's lust for power and her demise. Happy to have read that the people were de-robotized and given their proper lives back.

To great for words.

THE ENDING SUCKS! -_- Sorry. But it was good when Amy/Shad were a couple! That was just wrong, I tell you. I don't usually do this, sorry!

NO! I wanted Amy to win... -_- Sorry, I'll stop reviewing.

I know I keep on writing reviews ; BUT I LOVE THIS STORY! Amy is so evil! she should be evil. SHADOW SHOULD BE IN THIS! Not tat I', saying this sucks, I'm just stating.. I hope he is cause I'm a SHADOW LOVER!

This is such a good story! I love it! Evil Sonic! Must... die! One thing... why do you have ally in this? Sally is a stupid charcter to me... -_- Sorry, i couldn't help it. Anywa, ON TO CHAPTER 2!

This story's more interesting than anything, except "Illusions in Hell", I've ever come across... Keep it up.

Shadow walked into the roboticizer on his own willpower,

How much of his own mind does he still have?

How come Mina's no longer under Eggman's programming?

“Yes Mistress Amy!”

Wrong name.

You didn't give much detail on the changes to Sally.

new empire that valued both freedom and honor

She had a VERY funny way of showing it!

Reminds me of Medabots . . . anyway, I REALLY wish you had gone into more detail about how things had changed and how things worked and so forth.

cool. intense.

Dude...

! %!%! ! i hate your !%!# ending!

but hey, cool story.