wow. that was amazing! i loved it so much, especially toward the end. i almost cried reading the last chapter. poor spike! anyway, great job!

cool story :-}

That was a very sad ending.

-Ellie

The epilogue made me cry this is a new fave for the slayer series that I have fallen in love with. I admitt again that the ending was so sad it made me cry I love how it has a poetic end though quite appropriate since William was a poet.

i want to point out one thing that is at the end of this chapter Spike isn't Angel's Grandsire it's the other way around Angel is Spike's. That would make Spike his Grand-Childe.

This was a wonderful story. I abosolutely loved it. It's too bad Buffy didn't get a chance to really raise her daughter, but I like the fact that she died because of a demon and not an apocalypse. It seems kinda stupid that she would die by the hands of a demon and that's kinda what appeals to me. The simplicity of her death.

I read this several years ago, I think on another site but I am not certain, it's been a long time. I enjoyed it again today as much as did then. A few misspellings and homophones but most weren't glaring enough to detract from the overall work. I also like that you didn't choose the traditional route of Buffy/Spike. Thanks for sharing.

Wow! I am amazed. I usually don't review fanfictions because some of them don't leave a lasting impression but your story... I was enthralled. By the end of the story I was in tears. I commend you for the talent you have for writing and I hope I get to read more of your stuff.

It's beautiful.


I don't know what else to say, but I read it, I enjoyed it and it made me happy (and sad at the end).

absolutally wicked will read more of asap!

WOW! Beautiful story...especially the epilogue...it had me in tears. :)

Love the story. The ending was so emotional. It really highlights the extent of Spike's feelings for Buffy. You're one of the few writers who actually deals with Buffy dying and leaving everyone behind...for good.

Wonderful story. Really enjoyed it.
Plan to check out your others (if any).

awww

great story. although I did think when Drac showed up that you were going to add Dawn to the mix - I guess the monks decided *not* to send their Key to a Slayer who was so obviously involved with a Vamp, eh? :-)

That was the greatest story. I absolutely loved it. The end was so sad, but you knew it was gonna happen. Thanks for writing a wonderful story.