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| Shadow 2006-01-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseIts great...but isn't Selena the same Selena as used by koriandr-star? If so then shouldn't he be credited or is this some form of dispute? As he/she talks of an IFF he/she is doing and comments on characters like Selena under his fiction. Sorry its just confusing as its a totally diiferent version I seen compared to this one. I mean Selena is very selfless here. Keep it up. |
| bynon carget 2005-11-11 ch 1,  | abuseI hate it when good stories stops mid way specially a Story about Georg one of my fave chars you get to work MR or I shall bite |
| firstnexus 2004-11-06 ch 1, | abusewhy is sasarai so out of character? Kage wasn't needed, why would he be there so far down south? He was based and raised in Toran let alone clive. The story does feel like (lets bring up all the bad ** characters and have a semi battle royale.) Clive and Kage weren't needed. But sasarai is the biggest sin here, he appears to be...kind?! When was harmonia's most deluded and irrating high priest 'kind' and caring? The fact he has no complaints in helping a pyscho like luca pretty much shows his colour as a ambtious general who sees things like war as opportunities. Though the plot here does get intresting when it involes gerog and is clearly your greatest strength and selena is a intresting character. Is she a self made character as i found other users putting her into their story. hope u found the review useful. |
| gfhfgyfyueuy 2004-01-13 ch 1, | abuse..better than that mysterious luc fic at least. Not bad. |
| Nash Latkje-Clovis 2003-01-17 ch 1, | abusegreat piece! XD now i know how Selena came onto Falenan throne... just say that i'm studying for the KC's IFF!! teeheehee... never had i imagined Lorelai that way tho... and Killey the Firebird? ^^;; keep up the good work! |
| YamiZero 2002-10-18 ch 1, | abuseYet again, you did a good job, keep up the good work and don't lose your pride when writing. |
| King Gilby 2002-10-18 ch 1, | abuseOnce Again you have done it...hmmmm could Lorelai be getting Tipsy for Clive???? Clive is hella cool in this fic!!! good job.... Mike aka Enslavement OF War |
| Al Kristopher 2002-10-18 ch 1, | abuseAwesome, awesome, awesome, and great. It's about frickin' time somebody wrote about all that Falena mess...! Nice to see Clive, too--as well as all those other less-used characters. Georg is the MAN! |