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| Legendary Chimera 2006-08-24 ch 1,  | abuseI usually don't read poetry at all but this was very good. |
2004-05-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseAbsoulutely brilliant! |
| Black Rogue 2004-01-13 ch 1, | abuseI own final fantasy x and the sending is just as you describe it. |
| Final Fantasy x player 2003-12-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery moving! It's really gd! |
| Naota 2003-12-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou're quite a natural at writing poetry! You have such a creative talent and I hold much respect for you. I loved the poem! |
| Devon 2003-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is deep, dude... Real deep. |
| Lenne 2003-10-01 ch 1, | abuseI love your poem its so AH! (FALLS OFF SWINGY CHAIR) UPDATE SOON ^0^ |
| Grant 2003-08-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my god. it was absolutely amazing! i loved every second of reading it. you have a natural talent. Fantastic work. |
| Angels Tear 2003-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it!! It describes the sending perfectly. Good work. |
| Fallen Child 2003-06-29 ch 1, | abuseWow, that is really good, I really liked it. Great Job! |
| Spirit Lovelorn 2003-01-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was a lovely poem. Very emotional too. I can see the scene unfolding as I read it. Nicely done. |
| Dincht Girl 2002-10-25 ch 1, | abuseWow ... that was lovely. I liked this a lot. Keep up the good work. I can picture the Movie scene with the poem ^_^ |
| Hyne 2002-10-20 ch 1, | abuseYou really do a great job with your poetry.The sending was so unique and i loved the way you wrote about it. Most are ..um..rather boring or too 'dark' and gloomy. You should do more, i am a fan of your work. ^_^ |
| Sniper Wolf and Her Sniper 2002-10-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, whenever I try to find poems, most of them are bad, but this one was really good. I ereally enjoyed this and I loved how it all flowed together. It really worked well with the Dancing part of the FFX. Keep it up! This was really wonderful! ^_^ |
| Bangles 2002-10-19 ch 1, | abuseI generally don't like poems that rhyme; they sound too fake, forced. But this one flows. I love the repetition of the first and last stanza, and particularly ending it with '...'--no periods at all thoughout the poem, it just continues, on and on. Definitely fits. The only problem that I can think of to point out is a typo, which hardly counts ('her dance beings'--should be 'begins', yes?). All in all, bravo. |