I really like this a lot i found myself unable to stop reading.

but i wish Ukyo would have known it was Ryoga who saved the

girl

Why did the hospital people hate him?

sorry i was a bit confused on that part..

hospital people are suppose to be kind

and would never celebrate when a patient

is released. it's almost as if you

made ryoga seem like a killed or a something

can you please explain?

OH, WHAT NOW! Is this crossover with xxxholic or Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicles?

WHAT! RYOGA'S A PART OF YAKUZA? Ooh That's really Great.

really good story. i like it and i hope you decide to continue writing it.

WHERE ARE ALL THE GOOD WRITERS NOW? OMG! THIS IS SUCH A GREAT FAN FIC OR RYOGA AND UKYO! I LOVE IT SO MUCH

wow, I LOVE THIS! I REALLY LOVE UKYO AND RYOGA STORY!

MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE!

SO, NOW THAT YOU'VE HEARD ME LOUD AND CLEAR, I SAID!

MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE!

UNDERSTOOD?GOOD!

hi, i message u using my other account, or other unregistered name account.. anyway, thanks for the reply... i really appreciate it, i added u in my fav author, because i find ur other story really great... yeah, i totally understand, sorry for the comments that i made in this story, hehehe... i didnt mean to be demanding, i really think that ur a great author, hope u made an update on "lost one?" (too lazy to check the title again) and make more story... i also leave a comment on the evil summer fic, after reading this... but i think that was a few days ago... and really really thank u for telling that they will end up together, but i think i had realized that when i read ur other stories, not realizing that i had read ur oldest story before, and i just came across this story that day, that i didnt check ur other stories... but thanks for informing me, hehe... i guess, ur story is different from the other writer, that i thought that they wont end with each other, that had made me lil worried for a moment. and w i really think is unique how u came up with their same personality being portrayed in this story. i really like it, now im looking for the same story as this... with the same attitude in ur story... i just hope i will be able to find... so im requesting that u should made more stories... ) cause i really like it... btw, what i meant for these story was some of the chapter are really good, but some chapters were not good, thanks for understanding my comment...but i understand now, that this story was abandoned for a long time... but anyway, i really loved ur humor...)

can u please update this, and the one left behind, i love the story of the one left behind.. hehehe, thanks for replying back to me, im glad that your still around..

just make sure, if ur going to finish this, that ukyo and ryoga end up together, i like some chapter of the story... lol... cause u did write that in ur decription. thats why i put effort to read it until the chapter 16... ur last update. some chapter really bores me... yes , im a critic... and its also nice u put humor into it

i will put this on my fave... but doesnt really mean its my fave... just put it there, so that ill know that i have read this story...

well... the story is weird! its not getting anywhere since u did this story 2002- 2007... are u still on track? or ur just trying to finish it... its no where good/. just hilarious at some part

hey, the description says that this is a ryoga and ukyo fic, it seems it was on the recent chapter... but what now? i love ukyo and ryoga to be together.

this chapter doesnt caught my interest much, but its all good, ill go check the next chapter... lol.. anyway all the chapter that i read are really excellent. i like it when the story is slow... and i remember ryoga's power had something about lions... and ukyo's butter dragon... hm... it would be cool that ryoga had a power of some kind of dragon... cool! like i said, i love the pair/ ukyo and ryoga, ever since way back in the 90's

hi, some chapters were really funny, especially with ukyo in it... lol... and i remember something, i need to write it down before i forgot.. in this chapter, ryoga had this dragon power or something, and i remember that ukyo use butter dragon too... something like that... i like both of these pair... very much! and i dont mind that they dont fall fast that easy in your story...