This is kind of messed up.. Rinoa dies leaving her kid, and Squall doesn't care? That doesn't sound normal to me at all.

oh...so sad...keep at it!

If she chooses Squall, can I have Seifer? Or the other way around?...Good chapter! I really like it so far.

An enjoyable story, I do hope you finish it!

keep it up. excellent plot line

Hmm. It could use a little more description? I haven't read the other chapters yet, though. I think the timing is a little whacked, like some other reviews said, but that's being a little nitpicky, so don't mind that. It sounds pretty promising.

ohh yeah! this kicks butt! Write more, please!

okay, i want to reveiw this before I forget some of the things I've thought of. First, you should really tell us how much time passes and where. It's pretty confusing. Second, this story is kicking some big-time butt! I haven't read this chapter yet.

i'm on chapter 2, and personally, I think Squall had this coming for a long time. Thanx. Oh, and I hope I pray that Squall will go on a killing spree. I don't know, but it's what I'd do.

Pretty good so far. I'll read the rest when I get home (if I can get my internet connection to work, that is). Keep up the good work!

woo-hoo! this is pretty good! keep it up!

Poor Seifer. ;_; Keep going! This is really good! :)

How could you kill Rinoa? You know, I wish that you'd warned us readers about that ahead of time... As well as the Squall and Quistis *gag* coupling.

M'kay...I've finished the story of what is posted so far (Chapter 14). All I can say is that this is pure brilliance! The story ties everything together as it goes, and it's a wonderful story! Can't wait for Chapter 15!

The plot grows more complex! I wonder what's gonna happen now that Matthew's at the Garden? I can't wait to read more...must eat breakfast...*stomach growls*