great story

It's really good.. it's like your stories get better as you write more.. the flashbacks were very well written

Much better. I still don't understand it, but then again I just finished writing for lit so my brain is zzzzzzzzzzzz

Good job! I enjoyed this story. You did very well developing the characters. I think the necklace and inscription were very sweet. Don't quite understand what "Maybe he’ll let me get off with having my own for a few hours" means, but I can get the gist of it. I look forward to more of your writing!

Good part! Nice flashbacks. Your story is progressing very well! You're not really supposed to hold down a person in a seizure, though, only make sure they can't hurt themselves. Kai is a very interesting character. THis is well written. Good job!

great story cant wait for the next one!

Well done! Love the flashbacks. I need to go and read your earlier story. This one makes it sound like Kai was abandoned and not part of the project. Good character development. Good description of the seizures and effects. Great job!

I like. Hope you write more it's just a little confusising.

this rox!