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| Anjali Organna (too lazy to... 2003-09-08 ch 13, anon. | abuse"Donna woke up, and wished she hadn't." *dies* I love this series. |
| little-starling 2003-08-03 ch 7, anon. | abuseJust a quick note: Still loving it! |
| little-starling 2003-08-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseOk, I've just finished reading chapter two and just thought i'd write a wee comment or two anyway... I am at this very moment looking down to the right hand corner and am extremely happy that thee is an arrow indicating that there's another chapter... I have a good feeling about this one, you have all the characters down to a T Ok, i'm away to read the next chapter little-starling aka mcwillow22 |
| FLuFFy 2002-11-10 ch 21,  | abuseWonderful, Nomad, as always. |
| Cat 2002-11-08 ch 21, anon. | abuseLove this series - it's amazing. |
| Baked Goldfish 2002-11-08 ch 21, | abuseBravo. Really nothing much else to say. This series continues to be great. |
| cpp 2002-11-08 ch 21, anon. | abuseLet us all know when you write your children's books, I want to read them! I think you're extremely talented. |
| BenRG 2002-11-08 ch 21, | abuseWell done on going for a book contract, Nomad! You are a talented enough writer to deserve it. You managed to catch the personalities of Leo and Jed in this particular part. The President in West Wing has always had this messianic quality about him, and you capture that well here. This is a superb work. I think that I speak for everyone when I say it is well appreciated. BenRG's Overall rating: 8/10 |
| USCJCF 2002-11-08 ch 21, | abuseBeautiful. |
| Jana 2002-11-07 ch 20, anon. | abuseHow can this series possibly continue to get better and better with each passing chapter? I don't know how, I just know it does. This is so beautifully done... |
| cpp 2002-11-07 ch 20, anon. | abuseThis part almost made me cry. |
| USCJCF 2002-11-06 ch 19, | abuseConfused about that exchange between POTUS and Charlie. Glad Josh found Leo. What previous review said about Sam and Steve. :-) |
| Elizabeth Routledge 2002-11-06 ch 19, anon. | abuseGuy's walking down the street and he falls in this hole... and for Josh, it's always going to be about guys in holes, because he's not the type to ever forget that Leo was the one who saved him from himself. That was a better organized thought in my head. Sam and Steve continue to personify cuteness. |
| BenRG 2002-11-02 ch 15, | abuseWell, that soldier guy (Hardcastle?) is definately going to cause trouble. The question is: How far will he go? As for Donna... Well, I have no sympathy. One shouldn't drink if you can't take the consequences. ;-) Still reading, keep going! BenRG's Rating: 7/10 |
| BenRG 2002-11-01 ch 14, | abuseAh! I love Lord Marbury! He is such a wonderfully... /English/... and superbly eccentric character. It is inevetable that this wouldn't mesh well with Toby's pragmatism or Leo's formality. I wonder... has Her Majesty's Ambassador been playing cupid? I wouldn't put it past him. Still a great character story. Something tells me that Sam is going to step on a lot of toes, and that isn't the /only/ thing that he is going to bruise. BenRG's Rating: 7/10 |