hey, this is good,I'd like to read the next chapter! please continue quik!

hi there!
i finally got around to reviewing this and all i have to say is:great!!!
i think i like the first chapter best (blush) but the prologue is very interesting too.
why don't you continue this thread? (hint)

This is great as usual! Vegeta is so cool...the way you put him that is...lol. When I'm watching the episodes...I never think so...I'd think Gohan or...trunks, ok, I'm getting off track! Great...this just goes along with the rest of the story! Sugoi!

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