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| prince of darkness 2008-01-06 ch 17, anon. | abusehey how come u quit writing the story when it was getting interesting |
| supersaiyaman 2007-09-01 ch 17, anon. | abusei relly would like it if you would finish this fanfict.the first fanfict was so good and the second one is relly good as well but is incomplete.i loved the first part.i hope you get up the writing spirit to finish this fanfict. |
| supersaiyaman 2007-07-28 ch 17, anon. | abusethis is a relly relly rtelly good seqell i hope at some point you get up the spunk to finish this story becuse its a shame to leave a good story hanging like this. |
| supersaiyamna 2006-08-17 ch 17, anon. | abuseplease countinue the seqill it is relly good. |
| supersaiyaman 2006-07-30 ch 17, anon. | abusegood story please continue writing it.i relly want you to complete it.the first story was relly relly good dont be discuraged by lack of revews some pele just want to wait until things are complete before reading it. |
| PROVIEW 2005-12-31 ch 17,  | abuseI loved it just as much as i loved the first one. Please wright some more. |
| ss5-gohan 2005-12-24 ch 17, | abusecan u PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE! I really enjoy this story its so amazing and i really want to know what happens becauce this story is fantastic.PLEASE CONTINUE i really want to know what happens to gohan and i can't stop reading this story because the story ROCKS!If i had to rate this story i would give a 10 out of 10 (10/10)SO PLEASE CONTINUE IF YOU DIDN'T I WOULD PROBALLY KILL MYSELF.SO CAN U PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY PLEASE. From:ss5-gohan (p.s)I BEG U PLEASE CONTINUE.I REALLY DON'T WANT TO KILL ME. or DO I?[creepy isn't it] |
| supersaiyaman 2005-09-27 ch 17, anon. | abuseits a shame you dont have more revews this is a relly good story i hope you countinue witing it.wi wonder what she used to destroy the remote .also i wonder why gohan will not wake up. |
| kate 2005-09-02 ch 17, anon. | abusedarn those cliffhangers |
| supersaiyaan 2005-07-04 ch 14, anon. | abuseCOME on this story deserves alot more revews than 29 it is a relly good story.i hope the outher dosnt getr desceraged by the lack of reviews.i cant wait to see if and how gohan getrs threw his sickness and however is torchering him they will find him and make him stop. |
| Starbolt180 2005-07-02 ch 11, | abuseI like your story ideas! Great job! |
| kate 2005-04-03 ch 12, anon. | abuseI thought you had fallen off the face of the Earth or something because you haven't updated in a while. Try updating more often. |
| supersaiyaman 2005-03-03 ch 11, anon. | abusei hope you finiush this story the first story was relly goo i hope the swqal gets completed. |
| animeali 2005-02-02 ch 11, anon. | abuseOh my gosh this is such a great story! I can't wait to find out what happens to Gohan with the microchip and everything! Keep up the good work:) |
| Ryu no Hono 2004-06-20 ch 8, | abuseWell, this is an awesome story; hope that it doesn't take as long to update next time as it did to get this out. The only problem I have with the story is that you don't make new paragraphs to introduce new speakers, which makes it a bit more confusing. Also, you should use a comma if, after the speech, you're going to add who said it instead of a period. |