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| cally777 2006-12-19 ch 1,  | abuseYeah I guess this is about how you deal with the death of a loved one in whatever world |
| Saffire Raynius 2004-08-17 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was... deep. It was very interesting to read. The ending was the best. "A few steps were taken back from the edge. Untainted air filled his lungs. He gained a rush of speed and felt his feet leave the edge. For a short lived moment, he flew." Now I'm going to think about that for a long, long time. It means something to me. I have no idea why, but it does. Thanks for the review. |
| Ashe Romeo 2004-02-21 ch 1, | abuseIt's short, but the meaning was strong. Very good. I'd try to help you out, but once again it's short and there were no mistakes, so yeah... Um sorry this is so shot, but great job! |
| BlitheringBard 2002-10-19 ch 1, | abuseOh, sweetie... this is so sad. I hope whatever is depressing you was eased by writing this. One foot in front of the other, one breath and then another... sometimes that's all we can do. |