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| cursedgirl 2006-03-02 ch 1, | abusevery good! whana reade more about it.. =) |
| Bluezenith 2005-04-14 ch 1, anon. | abusegood piece of writing. enjoyed reading. |
| Danielle L.B 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abuseI'm feeling slightly annoyed with Clarice today, I just watched Hannibal for another time so I love this! Finally Clarice experiences what it feels like. That was an AWESOME ending. Throwing her words right back at her. Great job you did! |
| GuessWho 2005-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseNot in a thousand years. . .turning her words back on her, eh? Cool. I wonder if she will die quickly-he does love her, after all-or if his anger will cause him to have some FUN... Maybe you could do a second story! Ta ta, GW |
| Magick 2004-08-26 ch 1, | abuse*shudders* oh dear Gaia, that was, intense. I have to agree with your view of the way things would be, the GD has far too much pride and self control to let anything else happen (in the movie at least!) Such an irony, that in the book he gives her infinite chances to learn, expand. C'est la vie, though, *deep breath* disturbing, but with a painful honesty that I like. I would suggest you use a little more description next time though, a little constructive critisism. It would help give the world a little more depth, and add another aspect to an already stunning peice! |
| BlytheBee 2004-07-05 ch 1, | abuseCruel perfection! BRAVO! |
| TimeAsunderQ 2004-06-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesome ending! I didn't see that one coming! Yeah, I do agree that the movie's ending was a bit blah. This was powerful! *mental note*: never cross Hannibal. He does not give second chances. |
| shanreno 2003-07-11 ch 1, | abuseinteresting |
| moonlitbastet 2002-11-29 ch 1, | abuseWow. This was amazing. I, too, didn't like the movie's ending (the book was _so_ much better), and this fic was not only well written, but had the perfect twist at the end...Simply amazing. I can't say it enough...I'd give you a 2000/10. ^_^ |
| DarkShadow1 2002-11-03 ch 1, | abuseawwww....damn! I love happy endings, but that one was good as well! |
| LadyOfTruths 2002-10-24 ch 1, | abuseThe first time I read this (quite a while back now) I had no idea why someone would want to write such a thing. Now, I see it as one of the best fics I have read. It does as all well, not to forget who the GD is. This is brilliant Hannah, I'm glad your posting your work here. |
| satanslut 2002-10-19 ch 1, | abuseBrava! At last,a plot twist that IS unfamiliar territory......and yet it's so RIGHT......thanks for taking the character's into the funhouse,how truly delicious that they each now speak the other's fatal last words! Hannibal in Clarice's shoes???? HMMM,but are high heeled pumps truly BECOMING to a sadistic,psychiatrist/predator??? HMM,what the well-dressed serial killer will wear??? Please give me(and other aesthete's who read fan-fic for fun) a new chapter POST HASTE.....or I might well join the Postal Service! This is GOOOOOOD stuff......more,more,more!(yes,I know,invoking the 70's is tasteless......but hey,I'm an elderly sort of fan-fic addict) |
| luna8 2002-10-19 ch 1, | abuseSuprisingly I really liked this! Thanks for posting, luna. |
| Saavik 2002-10-19 ch 1, | abusewell done. very ironic. ~S~ |
| Aine Deande 2002-10-19 ch 1, | abuseOH that was perfect! Superbly written, and yes, the ending wasn't a happy one, but it is the only acceptable one. I too was very unhappy with the ending of the movie... one thing we fanfic writers do is try and fix it. :-D You certainly did admirably in that department. VERY good!!! But then I love all your stories, so... Love, Lu |