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| Serphenia 2006-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, I really like this story... But you're not planning on continuing? It seems as though you've already figured it out (cause I can't imagine doing a mystery any other way) so there should be no reason not to continue...Unless you don't want to, you're bored or something... Still, 'twould be a shame to leave such a good mystery unfinished...There aren't that many good ones out there... If you can, I hope you update this sometime. |
| Urei-Sama 2004-09-27 ch 1, | abusehehe, this is a REALLY good start for a 'whodoneit' fic. the details are set out really well. its got to be hard to duplicate that kind of thing when you dont have the visual effects you do in the anime or the manga and i think you pulled it off quite nicely! the only thing that bothers me... is that there are no suspects as of yet... but hey~ thats your problem ^_^ and im sure youll make this bloom into a wonderful mystery story! >>urei |
| Dark-Angel-Vincent 2004-06-16 ch 1, | abuseBOOYAH! you'd better keep writing! (or you shall anger the great Vincent Valentine!) i was soo into it that i lost track of everything!( even my ramen on the stove...u_u;) it was a small price to pay tho!! the next chapter had better be like this next time, or there shall be rath to suffer! P.S. wOOt. |
| otaku1412 2003-01-24 ch 1, | abuseGreat work! A question - is it finished? |
| CSakuraS 2002-11-08 ch 1, | abuseCOOL! It's a tough job coming up with your own mystery, and so far you seem to be doing a good job! Keep it up! |
| mdseiran 2002-10-28 ch 1, | abuse*grin* Since I can't make head or tails of this, my first impression is that this is one mystery I'm going to enjoy! :D Keep it up, would love to read more! |
| Hibbah 2002-10-28 ch 1, anon. | abuse*grin* Since I can't seem to make head or tails of it, I ahve to say it is a very good mystery, hehe. Of course, this is only the firts chapter. :D I am really looking forward to reading some more, keep it up! |
| Ryder77 2002-10-25 ch 1, anon. | abusehmmm.... very detective novel-ey. nice ^_^ more, please! |
| Apparition 2002-10-24 ch 1, | abuseIt is not everyday that a fanfic author comes up with an original case. It is really hard to think of them you know. Me, being absolutely idiotic around cases couldn't even solve them *sweetdrop* I'm not even sure if there is enough clues here to form a complete picture of what had happened. Anyway, your write in surprising details. Heh, just loved the cute-little-brother gesture of Conan. It works every time. I would wait for the next chapter, hoping that I would be struck by genius to solve the case or just wait for the case to be solved. |
| Frances Marie 2002-10-19 ch 1, | abuseOh yeah! Go me, first review! I'm glad to see something else come from you. I really liked "While the Rain Falls". You've set up an extraordinarily-detailed case that reminds me of Gosho himself. Plus, just like in a Gosho case's first introductory files, the most I can do is scratch my head at it and make some weak assumptions. I have no problems with your grammar or formatting, it's really quite good, and while characterization is a bit harder to address in an opening chapter the characters you've introduced for the most part are mainly intact, especially Conan's train of analytical thought. Keep it up. |