I love it I love it I love it!That was really good!I love this story,the ending was great!Again,I love it!

I like your take on how Rory & Jess finally get together. It makes so much more sense this way, instead of how they dragged it out for months and months on the show. Also, good job at keeping them both in character. Their discussion on books was really well done - it sounded like something straight off the show. :) Also, I must commend you on making Jess' movation for being with Shane believable; most stories I've read have him being downright cruel/careless towards her. This was a wonderful story, and I look forward to more of your work!

WOW! Your story is REALLY good! I know you told us you don't want us to mention how hott Milo Ventimiglia is, but I can't help it! He is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO hott! Oh well, you already know that, so why am I telling you again? lol. Whatever. Luv ya lotz!

the14milo

wow yet another great story! im dont usually like short stories but i really liked this one. You did a really good job with keeping both jess and rory in character.

i like it. they're banter is a bit ogg (no offence) but aside from that the story's great.

I can't remember if I've reviewed this or not, but now I've finished it and I just have to regardless. :) It's rare that you find a story that does Rory and Jess justice and I think you have. I think you've captured Jess's thoughts quite well and that- I'm not sure how to word it- you made Rory see the error of her ways. Plus your ending is rather pyschic! Go you!

tht was such i go0d story i loved it jess is so0o0o0o sexXi!well keekp up the go0d werk!

ºnikKiº

Wow. This story was great. You're great. Rory's great. But most of all, Jess is great! And hot too, wink wink. But seriously, you're talented. This was one of the most realistic fanfics i've ever read. Congrats! Keep it up :)

I really enjoyed your fan-fic. Please keep sharing your writing. You were pretty true to the characters and I appreciate that.

Thanks taking me into the world you created.

Jennifer

I think you did a brilliant job with the entire story. I really like the ending, with the line, "He was finally at peace." It's such a perfect line that really fit in with your fic. Excellent, and I can't wait for a new story from you!

I can't wait to read more! They are all completely in character and a lot like the show (I'm very articulate I know)Please continue!

:-D

Kari

P.S. Thank you for all your reviews on my story, it's nice to know someone s readng :-)

please keep writing !

This chapter was very Gilmore-esque. Together, apart, together, apart, with Rory and Jess, I mean. No, as to their relationship we're going to be tortured forever. But what I really loved was how you focused on how terribly Rory has been treating Jess, as well. Just because we know she likes him more, that doesn't mean that she's being any nicer. In fact she's being meaner. Like in "Eight O'Clock at the Oasis". Dean pages, Bye bye Jess. I was really mad at Lorelai in the season premire because she kept ranting on about how terribly Dean was being treated. She said something about Jess, but it was like a sentence. Write more, please!

- Lizabeth

Hey! Nice fic. It felt pretty true to character. Write more!

ugh...i hate cliffhangers so pleaSE update soon cause it's really good!