O.O

That was... indescribable. Amazing. Painful and agonizing and beautiful. You're really something.

*appreciative whistle* Grand, grand work my friend! I loved the whole scenario, it really made me think. Another story for my favorites list...

Amazing! Very well written.

That was so AWESOME! I love the take you took. The imagiry is striking and your words are poetic. Don't get discouraged by others, I loved the two sides becoming one. (I didn't find it confusing at all) Keep writing. _*

I was amazed by this story! Few people ever write about Nameks in fanfictios (except Piccolo) and even fewer ever consider the ramifications of the Nameks' culture (such as having one parent, being able to fuse, etc.) This story was such a surprise! I really enjoyed it. It's refreshing to see a completely original idea told so wonderfully. Thanks for writing it! _

*Shudders and starts to cry* Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! That is one of the most beautiful fics I have EVER read! So detailed and emotional. Cargo gave everything up... *Sob*

Beautiful

Very intricate. A bit hard to follow, but very beautiful. And sad. Anyway, it's nice to see a fic about these two.

Amanda Swiftgold, that was amazing! I mean it, truly amazing. I hope your teacher gave you a good mark, because you are a very talented writer. Not just in plot and idea, but also in grammer, vocabulary, and all the other mechanics of writing which are important to any good story. Good job on a very original piece of work.

A well wrort but also very a very sad fic.