Love this story.

I love your story! It is totally great! You are not crazy for writing it; the angst was awesome! I am a writer too and I always get stuck because I try to write what others want. I stopped doing that and my stories are getting longer and better (I think. D:). Anyways, I love the angst that you put in this and I think it would've been better if it continued like that! I love angst. Don't forget: though most people like happy, sappy endings, there are still those few people that will approve, if that helps. Sorry if it doesn't. :D I really like your ideas over what happens and your writing is better than most people I've read so far. Though I don't know you personally, I feel you have great potential. Just keep writing what you want to write and ignore the little voice in your head that tells you to write for other people! :D And don't forget you have my support! I will try to find your other stories and rate them, but if I don't, then I'll make sure to tell other people about this great story! Byes for now; maybe I can show you my story later. It is kind of a parody, though. Hehe LxRaito :D Sorry I'm wasting your time btw... So I'll stop now! Byes!

*sighs disdainfully*

shame really.

oh wells! great fic anyways!

I'll probs come up with my own happy little ending in my head anyways!

lol

Just end it say they are free and Seph destroy JENOVA and all happily ever after...THE END...


Just finish this story...please

aww...I really liked this story..well too bad. But just so you know I thought you did an excellent job. And it makes sense...the ending I mean. It can't all be happiness. Life is life, sometimes it's fair, but most of the time it's not. But well we make the best of it.
Keep up the good work! :)

Hey, I just read this, and although I thought it was great and going fine, I can understand what you said. I'd like that synopsis though. It was a really cool story, and I personally woud love to be able to write in that style. It really was wonderful. Thank you for a wonderful reading experience.

Midnightdark

personally i think that this is probably enough, the thought that seph is changed and cloud is...well...free(ish) again, you could probably say it's a wrap in chap 3 O_o course, i skipped half of chap 2 by accident so yah... :D (course, there's that: six months ago part which needs wrapping up?)

Uhm...Just wondering...where's the synopsis...?

You should write it the way you think it's meant to be. I like the angst. Sappy romance is... okay, I suppose, but I like angst better. Though I was dreading horribly them entering the room and Cloud being all "I giggle when Sephiroth kisses my neck."

I was glad when Cloud got freaked out. ^^

You're a wonderful writer, though. I love it.

ow now that i read your authors note...your not continuing it? T^T ouch thats so sad -hurt-

OMG DUDE! Omg Chapter one was so cutee! and I swear to god! you even made me cry! no kidding when I finish the story My eyes water up but tears didnt come out XDD it was so dam sad! and what I like about it was that you amde it so into character! like nothing of it was out of character! man u r Dam good! (: continue! u must!

If you still need a beta reader, email me. I've nothing better to do anyway. *yawns*

I'm always looking for good final fantasy fanfiction, and it is difficult to come by. What I've read so far of your story is my favorite sephirothxcloud pairing on this website.

People are always portreying Sephiroth as misunderstood, or sensitive, or loveing. I, for one, believe that you know just how the one winged angel would be in a relationship with cloud... insane, troubled, cruel.

You had several simple spelling errors that belie your talent, though.

YOU! *points at you* continue please

I love your story! Sephiroth and Cloud are so cute together! Update soon please!