Beautifully done introspective of Seifer--what really drives him. I love the blood imagery and the description of him as the Red knight; very fitting, and you write Ultimecia fabulously!

Thanks for writing such a beautiful piece of work.

Reading good fics about Seifer's enchantment with Ultimecia always sends shivers down my spine. This, though, did more than that. You were able to cast a spell with this piece, and now I officially am smitten with your writing.

Magnificent. Enough said.

Cool!!

And bravo for making the only Seifer/Ultimecia story out there, that I'm aware of!

Don't stop doing things out of the ordinary!

Beautiful descriptive language!

Wow...just simply...wow.
If anyone had any doubts about language being a form of art, this piece should dispel them all. In this case, when you've written 1515 words and arranged them beautifully, the picture's all in the mind, and it's a masterpiece.

You've taken my breath away. Nothing I could say would match the eloquence of this peace. You are an artist of words. Truly magnificent.

wow...that was very original....

Beautifully wrought- your descriptions are so rich and sensuous. Gorgeous-chick. The imagery was profound and almost always without cliche. I hope this is a one shot- not that I wouldn't want to read more, but it's a perfect length now. A sort of prose-poem. Keep it all up! :)

Wow... That's really the only thing I have to say about this. I could picture the whole thing happening in my mind. It takes a great writer to do that. Excellent job.

Oh, God. This is not a story, it's a painting of words. How can a mere story draw images behind my eyes and seep into my skin like night? This is magic, deep magic. I know this isn't very helpful feedback, but I'm afraid you've quite turned my head with your woven words and I feel more than a little intoxicated. I'll try to come up with a more intelligent review once I can think straight again.

Wow, this was an interesting piece of work that I have never read before! Great job Starlight! The Ultimecia/Seifer thing you had going on was very well written and truly dark. Excellent details and descriptions. You have really nice writing skills! =)

that was... so touching... and just so great.. I felt like I were Seifer... you're genius.. I'm speechless.. it was like.. one of the best stories I've ever read...

Subarashii. You managed to send a shiver down my spine as I read this, a rare feat indeed.

You made one noticeable error, I think:

'He did her because all at once he desperately wanted to'

I'm pretty sure that you left out one word there.

Otherwise, it was simply incredible. And not much of a stretch. Good formatting, good spelling, good grammar, even good characterization. Says me anyway.

Keep writing.


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