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| Dark Vader 2008-08-30 ch 14, anon. | abuseFunny fanfic! I love Darth in this. |
| Tomoyo Kinomoto 2006-08-27 ch 1,  | abuseI have to say, it is an unusual mission, very unusual. Is she going to become the next Dark Lord? |
| ILUVZIM 2005-09-17 ch 13, anon. | abuseThis story is so cute! Please continue! |
| Nightwind 2005-06-13 ch 13, anon. | abusePlease continue the story, this is such a fun read. I love your depiction of Mara. I hope you update soon... |
| Jordan Kintz a.k.a. Darth B... 2005-01-21 ch 13, anon. | abuseGreat story. Please continue, it's better. You probably already guessed this, but Darth Vader is my absolute favorite character!! I just have this thing for villians. |
| haylea 2005-01-21 ch 13, anon. | abuseyou should definately continue. this is pretty funny, especially th epart with leia! mara jade is such a brat! more soon please! |
| maximus 2004-12-31 ch 13, anon. | abusethis is a great story please do a few more chapters. I'm hooked! |
| nobody 2004-12-16 ch 13, anon. | abuseGood story. Heh. ;P |
| vraie-rose 2004-12-06 ch 13, | abuseCute story. Keep writing it. |
| Elf with a lightsaber 2004-05-05 ch 13, anon. | abuseAll I can say is that it's really really good. It's such a cool story, I've always liked Mara. I did notice a few errors though. One, is that you misspelt Doing in chappie 13 and also continued. The other is that you don't use commas when the characters address each other. It shoud be "Leia, you should come with us." not "Leia you should come with us." A great story though, and I'm sorry about nitpicking. Keep writing. -The Elf who stole Luke's lightsaber... |
| Zimre Fa 2004-03-07 ch 2, | abuseHe he, the one thing the all-powerful Lord Vader cannot contend with: a small child. Cool idea, well-written too. I will return for more later. |
| Yandeim Nareim 2004-01-27 ch 10, | abuseYou do know that Vader could beat that game in a snap with his Force reflexes. You always make Vader look like he is nothing, and is a weakling. But it is still a good story. |
| Sky 2003-11-30 ch 13, anon. | abuseGood Chapter, I liked the fact that Mara is starting to listen to Vader more! |
| anon 2003-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseVader should kill the guttersnipe. Mara The hand isn't fit to lick his shoes. |
| The Second 2003-11-22 ch 13, | abuseGood work on this chapter! |