Er. . . I kinda forgot to put it in the story so I'll do it now, I don't own Tekken. There, I did it and I'm done and now I'm gunna shut up!

Very sad and touching end, but also very sweet and beautiful! Great job!

True, an angel never dies but she can sure go deaf with all your crying!? *sticks an apple into Kayochen's mouth*
*reads the convo in Kayochen's bio* And true, *snickers* I am such a good friend aren't I?
Anyways good going Kayochen! See ya in your new fic!

Awww! I really liked the unexpected ending, it was very nice and sweet! :) Keep writing! You would do great if you wrote Tekken 3 tournament from Jin Kazama's point of view, but it will be MUCH longer than this, and I don't think you would have time! All that mourning and depression, not to mention the battle within himself he has! Anyway, a beautiful story! :)

That was beautiful! I hope you write more stories like this.

Outstanding! Simply outstanding!

WAH! Don't critisize yourself on your writings! That's what *I'M* supposed to do! =P Anyways, this is really cool, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

OOOooooooooooh! This IS full of suspense! I really like your writing! :) Type it up soon!

He's gonna kill her??? Gotta find out! We want more!!

I thought this was really good! :). Write more I was enjoying.
From Harry! Brother! heehee

Bah, I'm on a stalk my bestfriends mode today...actually I just need to keep my fingers from freezing...still love your story though, but I have an onverwhelming hunch this is gonna end somewhat sadly...*goes to buy tissues*

it's good

This is such an original idea! I love this story!

Good one! Keep going!

Sweet! =) Write more!