While I relise it has been a while since you last updated I cannot help but to beg for you to update. This story is just far to humourous to leave unfinished.

Am I the only one who sees the dirtiness in the line: 'Tis a metaphor for my mighty...'?

I laughed so hard at that...

I like the way this is going. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing absolutely awful. For example:

"Do not look at me so Elrond! In any case you have greater things to worry about than shameful defeats"

It should be written thus:

"Do not look at me so, Elrond! In any case, you have greater things to worry..."

Either way. Lovely story.

Take care,

Maglor

you know, elrond chose to be more-or-less completely elf. and he's less half, more one eighth human anyway, he's not the bumbling half-human you make him out to be.

Something just occured to me (and I'm sorry, I know this is my third review in a row), but if Gil-Galad is still alive, then it must be the Second Age at the latest, and Elrond and Celebrian don't get married until year 109 of the Third Age.

I don't think Celeborn is QUITE as much an arse (or overprotective father) as you are implying, but it is funny nonetheless.

oh, supremest awesomeness! I LOVE this story!

what a great story!

i hope you will soon write more, i would love to know just how this ends!

lol, y do they always end up fighting?

lol, oh wow! :)

I love this story! Please, please, please update soon. I love how Haldir and Elrond sought to save her but in the end it was Gil-Galad who got to her first. Quite funny how hard they tried. Anyway, I hope that Celeborn will realize that Celebrian and Elrond were meant to be.

okay is this story done? i don't get it, is Gil-galad or Elrond supposed to be courting her now?

hm... i don't get how the dress looked, i can't figure out what its supposed to be...

this was good, i think that Galadriel wants Elrond and Celebrian to be together and Celeborn wants haldir and Celebrian to be together, intereting, maybe there will be a fight between the couple...

oh shit! Celeborn will surely kill Gil-galad for being a peeping tom!