Very suttle, perfect how her thought aren't completly on O'Conell but they're there. That's how the mind really works. I love these little ficlettes you do. They are Pure brilliants! You are an amazing athur! Kudos!

Hey, i love your fan~fic, you have to come out with the second one soon. I find your work to be brilliant! It really inspiers me!

~Adrian

screw whoever flamed u hun because i am way into this u have to continue.

This is a good start. I liked the way you played it out. Very nicely done. And, please remember, don't worry about flames...(I thought that was rather rude of whoever flamed you and didn't even reveal who they were)...just ignore such as these. They really mean nothing.

My personal rule of reviewing is 'If I don't particularly like the way a storyline is presented or if I do not like the romantic combination(which I have no problem with at all, other than the m/m, f/f), then I shall not review at all,' to preserve that particular writer's morale and self-esteem.......so don't worry about those kind of things if they come your way...ignore them...listen to the positive reviews...as I see, you have much, much more of those...

Girl...keep on writing!

Lula

Boring as!I hated it and i reckon um suck!U can way improve this story line ...by making something happen!

Wow, I like it so far. Get Evy dressed up, but I'm a hopeless romantic and hope she and Rick end up together. Please continue!

CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!

"He would be at the party tonight and if all she had to loose was her dignity, then she was better off than most people." thats great. I love it! SCANDELOUS! heehee ok i'm a lil off today, all i've done is sleep

I like the way you write, very much. You've caught my interest here, hope to see where it leads sooner rather than later. Nice work.

Cute:) Would love more, will you continue? What will Rick think of the dress? ...

Buff:)

GREAT...hope to read more soon:):):)