Wow, that was incredible. What an emotionally powerful story. I can't believe how good that was. Great job. I haven't checked your stories yet but I hope there's a sequel to this. You captured all the characters well as far as I believe, too bad Tenchi's still the whiny, stupid brat he always is. Anyway, great job, well written, and thanks.

Great FIC! GREATEST I"VE EVER READ!! YOU SHOULD MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER!

so the greatest tenchi muyo story is back .. chapters 1-7 no less.... thank you both

Ouch all those reviews gone. C'est la vie. I hope you plan on posting the next part to this, I bet many other readers would agree we have waited long enough.

Why is this being reposted? Plus I hate Hosuma, if this soes on i hope he meets a fitting end!
dennisud