Oh my gosh, that story was amazing! I love the way you ended the epilogue! It was...wow! You should think about making a sequel to it! It has amazing grammer! Unlike some of the stories I've read...Keep up the awesome work!

xXInuKat369Xx

love it

Loved the story!!
Good job ^.^

I really enjoyed this story!
The plot was original, and Kagome's not as bad as your introduction shows her!

Thanks for your writing!

Iris

I love it

"Then I pity his foolishness."
Wow, is all I can say. Perfect line. One of the everlasting lines.

few spelling and grammar errors but none the less a very lovely story! I am saddened that it only has 904 reviews(now 905 but whateves...) I can only hope that you continue to wright ^_^

Very enjoyable story and fit the characters well. I noticed you haven't written anything for a couple of years. Hope you start writing again.

Wow... In 2003 you completed this fic, and here I am, in 2009, and I just completed it myself. Well, you must of done a great job. Wait, you did! Great story!
<3 Valled

cool!

so cute but i felt bad for inu

lol it was friggin funny

First, before I forget, you have an error Kagome says "If you are going to be like this for the next 9 months I'm going to end up Kagome.". Now to one more pointer before the praise. Your Sesshoumaru's manner of speech is rather OC, rarely would such a regal personage curse, Sesshoumaru has a habit of speaking in this Sesshoumaru, that Sesshoumaru rather than stating I and phrases things short and to the point though stated very formally. In some ways your Sesshoumaru is too approachable and like a commoner in his speech being reminiscent of Inuyasha.

That aside, this story is wonderful! Very well written, after reading so many flops and being so terribly disappointed by the still growing writing skills of many writers on this site (particularly in the T section the M section had better writers and stories) I am enthused to find someone that writes well enough to consider setting, characterization, mood and other such writing techniques and who takes time to develop the plot! Excellent, entertaining, and generally believeable story.

great story. Sess was Ooc! How kawaii! (Fluffy: This Sesshomaru is not Kawaii. Me: -looks at him- Hell yea you are! Fluffy: -glares- Wench, you try my patience. Me: Whateva, Fluffy! Fluffy: -transforms- Gr... Me: KAWAII! -glomps Sesshomaru-) Yea, I'm insane & maybe psychotic. -sweatdrops- The story I'm faving.

lol that was soo cool!! yay too the ending :D hehe great story :D