This is absolutely wonderful. Good idea for a one-shot, but it just BEGS for another chapter. Perfect English (grammar and spelling-wise) is always a plus. The character consistency is also notable. Organization, as far as a reader as scrutinizing as me would be concerned, is well done.

Also, a venture as bold as a Tatsumi/Muraki attempt was not at all a bad attempt. It was brilliant. I hope you continue this, even if only for that aspect. Do e-mail me your thoughts about this if you must. I can also stand by as a beta if you need one. I'd love to hear from you.

...Just...amazing. I must read more.

O.o OMFG THANK YOU.

You have NO idea how long i've been looking for Muraki/Tatsumi fic. I don't care if they're still both lusting after Tsuzuki's ** in here. The fact that they were so close to NECKING each other... AGHH THE FRUSTRATION.

Are you still continuing this? I'm going to die if you won't. My Muraki/Tatsumi wants must be SATISFIED.

Hi! I found your name on Phantom Moon and checked your stories.

Man, this is awesome! I love your characterizations, so IC yet you've added a touch of your creative talent to it ;-D The story's chilling, exciting, and everything else good thrown in the mix.

Will be reading your other stories, especially since you've made a believer out of me ;-D

well damn. that was amazing.

yeah, i think that about sums it up.

Muraki loves his mind games, doesn't he? Although, I wouldn't really expect Tatsumi to be so...desirous. Eh, oh well. Loved the psychological taunting ^__^

Absolutely beautiful! I love how you handle Tatsumi's and Muraki's personality. This is a facinating characterization of the two of them. Job well done! Do I dare hope there will be more?
*Hint* *Hint* :)

That was SO good! I loved it! You portrayed Tatsumi beautifully! *sigh* This series is so good.!

Okay! That's it! ::throws hands up in complete defeat:: After reading this, it's official. I have completely fallen for your writing style.

Yup, yup, no use denying it now. ^_~ the way you use words is so unimitable and powerful. It's so meaningful and clear-cut, even during the subtler parts of the story.

Your writing style is beautiful! How I envy you, but my admiration supersedes that by far ^_^

And by the way! This story.wow.even after reading it twice, I'm still clinging onto every word. WONDERFUL job.

You have a way with describing my favorite bishounen Muraki. Disturbing. Insane. Dangerous. Ambrosial.

GOD! That was an amazing story! ^_^ I don't simply love your stories, but I also admire them fully! Keep up the brilliant job!

Great! I love this. I'm gonna read the sequel. Bai.

That was sooo great, wish you keep on writing!!
will look forward to somemore of your masterpieces!!!

I never write review in YnM section. This is the first time.

I came back rereading your fic the fifth time. Guess how I feel over your fic, huh?

Excuse me while I go die of the terminal coolness.


...^^; Wow. It's rare to find such good Yami fic.

poor tatsumi. Eh. Overall a good fic

O_O sugoi da. thats the best ynm fic i read in ages! sankyuu!!