Oh my gosh, that was an awesome story! I love Usopp and Yasopp and Bankinas' relationship, and this was perfect to show the story!

I absolutely loved it! Amazing story!

That was probably one of the best love stories I've ever read!! I love Usopp's parents so much...I mean, at first I wasn't interested in knowing how usopps parents met...I mean, it's in the past, right? I just wanted some One Piece adventure goodness! Luffy, Zoro, Nami, Sanji etc...but I really loved the characters you brought out of Usopps parents...and the writing, really...

thank-you so much! ^^

I was wondering if it would ever be possible for you to ever do a love story for Luffy? I mean, I wonder if he CAN love in that way? You're such an amazing writer...if you ever feel up to it...just a short one would do :)

THank-you again! I enjoyed it x

Aw~! That was so sweet! I loved it! It was very nicely written! Though... I thought Ben was a little harsh, but other than that, I thought that everyone was done perfectly! Thanks for such a sweet, good fic!

Thank you SO much for writing that. It was really increcibly sweet and...poetic. Heehee. You did a great job with their chracterizations. Kiina's father was so conniving. XD

I really enjoyed it!

DANG! it was just like reading the manga! Great work! So touching!

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*sniffle* BEAUTIFUL STORY!

OMG! I just read this and it was so...GOOD! I loved it so much! thank-you foir this wonderful story!

This was great! I loved it. I've never read a story like this. It's interesting to know hoe Kiina and Yasopp met. Also, I like the way that you made it so that Usopp was telling the others a story. That was a good idea. Great job! This was really well written!

Darn it! I'm crying! Usopp's my fave! I LOVE it! ^_^

That is such a lovely story! I read the entire thing in about an hour...with multitasking and my short attention span, that's a big deal. I am one of the few and proud Usopp fans (at least that I know of) and I do love this version of how his parents met. I must say, I came into this fic just hoping for a little bit of Shanks, but I am leaving it with even more love for Usopp...and a lovely warm fuzzy feeling to go along. Very nice, very nice.

*wants to stop crying, really! ^^*
I don't normally read het fics. But I decided to read this one on a lark. I did not regret it. I absolutely LOVED this fic! So cute, so funny, so bittersweet! I adore your Yasopp, and your Shanks is the best! And I love the fact that Bankiina is finally fleshed out as a character. Even if it is fanon, it feels more canon to me now. This was a wonderful, wonderful fic.

THAT. WAS. SO. GOOD!

I started reading and couldn't stop...I'm probably going to be late for my meeting, but I don't care. I loved this so much! It was cute seeing facets of Usopp reflected in each of his parents. Excellent job!

-H.

This is so weird. You have the exactly same view as I did about this whole Yassop and Kiina thing. Your explanation for their relationship in the form of this story is so wonderfully done! I adore it so much.

Sweet, funny, romantic, and touching. You've turned a pair of brief cameos into a completely believable couple. The prologue and epilogue with Usopp and the crew is one of my favorite parts, but I think... chapter 5 is the best. Tough call, though.