| Reviews for Keeper's Taunt |
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Spellspinner777 11/21/07 . chapter 1Sorry to mention this 2 the other reviewers but their is most definatly rhyme in it for example... KNIGHT LIGHT HELM REALM I think that this was fantastically done. Ignore the fools lol |
Kitty Felone 12/3/04 . chapter 1I think the description in this little poem is wonderful! Don't listen to what "Tichondrius" hsa to say about it, not ALL poetry has to have a rhyme scheme. Just as long as the flow remains constant and a good description of the words is in use. I like this, so shall show it off. |
1233122313441224142 3/16/04 . chapter 1Cool! |
Tichondrius 9/9/03 . chapter 1A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer.- no offence but theres not much rhythm or rhyme, its a bit random, I'm back from vacation, good knight. ?# ;?, eh? but its a good effort nonetheless, hope 2 read sum more of your stuff. |
Vick330 1/6/03 . chapter 1Quite good, I don't know much about poetry, but this would look good somewhere in the game. |
randompalindrome 12/27/02 . chapter 1that cool, kind of lkke an advertisment for it |
Belial 10/21/02 . chapter 1 Very good! Have you read mine? |