NANI? What is up with this? Please continue!

hmmm... well, this is rather interesting! I wanta see the next few chapters plz! (next few because your chapters are awefully short...:p)

Poor Cloud... revive him soon! .

hey i love this story!even if it's goin slow :P OoOoo i sence something between tifa and the wolf dude :) a pairing of the too maybe?

well i'll shut up now

oooo interesting.

sephiroth is revived.

he has the knowledge of the ancients

and is richard's father...

ooo want to know mother...

ooo... only thing..

shouldn't richard be mean to the people that killed his father...

unless... that his true intentions are to feed them to the lion(sephy)

if you want any help, i'm here.

email me

i'm pretty sure you could find some kind of use for next chapter.

Oooohhhh...nice story...are you going to like make a coupling here? Hhmm...oh well continue please! :)

So far so really good! _ Please continue!

***It's CloudxTifa forever!***

That's good, update soon.

I hope they find someone who can read it? Hurry with the next chapter!

Ok then so Meteor did occur.

So you should do something on how midgar was rebuilt.

Anyways, that was funny, She let out a loud yelp, when the rough, wet licking!

WEEEE

Sorry about that.

Keep up

Awaiting the next chapter

P.S. You have to figure out a way that Tifa figures out the whole reading the cetra language thing.

Hey email me

I might be able to help ya!

::looks around:: I LOVE TIFA! ::runs away screaming like a girl.

Just like that!

Hope that Tifa can't read it though

remember the cetra have a different language.

Cosmo Canyon would be the best place to have a library.

Plus where did all the wise men get to read all those books from? Seems logical to me that you chose CC. :)

Going to the next chapter

I can't wait for the storyline to set in. Umm a few things. Was midgar rebuilt. Did meteor happen at all? If it didn't then i don't know how Cid knows Tifa. None the less.

The lover thing bothers me a little only cuz you call someone "lover" when you have made love with them. Sometimes people miss use it as cheating on someone with a "lover".

Have they made love? Even though she just recently told him she loved him.

Well i'll stop bothering you.

Can't wait to move on to the next chapter

really really interested with what your trying to do here

Ouch, i got a tear for that last paragraph.

Going to the next one

The Wolf Talker is going to have a bigger part, isn't he? _ Please continue!

***It's CloudxTifa forever!***

Great story! I can't wait to see Cloud back!

I hope Tifa isn't chasing a lost dream. Hurry with the next chapter!