Nice Tekken fic. I liked the fighting scenes a lot. Jin is number one!

Nice chapter! I hope to see more of Jin's story here coz I'm a big fan.

Excellent job.This was a very good story.I hope you write a squel w/more Xiaoyin in it.^_^Well keep up the good work. Intill next time. I'll make sure I reive for you next time.Bye.

Missile? For two people? I think that was an overkilled gesture. Like I said before, the story is quite good, but maybe try to tone down the gaming factors and tone up the realistic factor.

Actually, the relationship between Jun and Kazuya wasn't the way this story told-watch the Tekken movie and you'll see... However, good writing anyway, maybe all you need is a little research before writing? But who's to say that originality's no good anyway?

G'day mate,

I'm a true-blue fightin' Aussie... And i don't talk like that NO AUSSIE DOES!

I finally got the chance to read the rest of this. I rate your Kazuya representation a 10. You hit him right on the nose. The story was excellent. And the blending of all the different characters was great. But the ending is "meh" so-so. I would've made the ending a bit more unique and less predictable. But other than that great job. Kazuya will never be truly defeated, he will rule and Jin will not stop him!...sorry.

*Claps hands* Wow that was simply amazing! There is no other way to describe thsi story. Im sorry it took me so long to finish reading it but Ive been busy. I went to the Tekken section to find a good Tekken story & this is what I found on my first try. I dont think I have to look for anymore this is I think probally the best Tekken story on the site & I havent even read any of the others. You did perfect justice to all the characthers keeping it true to the games storyline the entire time. The fights were done with great description & no one could ever ask fro anything more out of a Tekken story. Take a bow you deserve it.

That was great! You did a great job with those fight scenes, especially the last two, they're more exciting than the ones in the game. You should write a sequel, something about the next tournament, it doesn't matter if there's no game yet, I'm sure you can come up with something good. Anyway, I really enjoyed this, great job.

Hey, awesome. I mean it, totally awesome. Please, write a sequal? As to your other works, I love them so much!

Hey, awesome. I mean it, totally awesome. Please, write a sequal? As to your other works, I love them so much!

XD I love the dojo master's accent! *awards 20 points plus 30 for the (very rare anymore) good gramar and spelling*
*goes back to reading* ^_^

AMAZING! KEEP WRITING! T4 is my fave game, and you portray it BEAUTIFULLY!

Sorry it took so long to get to the 2nd chapter Ive been really busy. Buts it was great Im going on to the 3rd right now!

This is going great! I have T4 so I have a pretty good idea where Jin is right now. I like how you portrayed Kazuya as a good guy, just getting revenge. That's cool.

I LOVE THE XIAOYIN! hahaha!
please.update soon!

Kotou