this is really god I hope there is more later on -

i love this even though u make a mistake its ok because no man is perfect

I like it!

Please continue

you little clifhanger! this is so not cool. you have to continue sooner...

hope u continue this fic its really gd

Continue or I will send my midget minions to get you! GO CLEMI!

TO MANY SONGS!
THEIR IRRITATING ME I HAVE NOT A CLUE ABOUT THOSO THINGS YOU ARE TYPING!

...
This is weird, and way too short...
and it turned into humor?
... weird...

Alright, not to sound a little wierd...but you need to get your butt back to this story, lol!
It's a great story, but this cliff hanger has been the same one for a long time.

Liz: Too short.
Sui: It was nice! -
Polaris: This is old, isn't it?
MJ: Uh... why aren't I on your favorite authors? *shifty eyes*
Liz: Too short.
Sui: It could have used some editing, though... you need a beta reader!
MJ: ...
Polaris: So you finally updated, did you?
Sui: But Polaris, you're still on the first chapter!
MJ: Well, so are you!
*cough* Attack of the split personaliaties ;) It was good, short, and unedited. You could have done better, but it's old, isn't it? I'll read more. And MJ meant what she said! [Uh... why aren't I on your favorite authors? *shifty eyes*]

Hello! I finally remembered that I had your screen name 4 as well as Sumeragisui's.
- I kept forgetting...like how I keep forgetting to do my math homework...TT-TT
Your fic is so good, I'm jealous. O well. Sayonara. -

send the next hcpater soon
mknancy

continue soon!

send the next chapter
mknancy

I think u should make them run into each other. update soon!