WOW. This is VERY well done for such s short oneshot. It's almost like a poem the way the words flow together in such a discriptive pattern. VERY nice!

that is just heartbreaking. i like to think that they would be able to get along. i mean, all it takes to stop that anger is for one of them to levelly- oh. right. neither of them is sane enough to calm themselves down.

anyway, this was beautiful despite the wrenching sadness.~

aw...so bittersweet!

This is pure unadulterated love.

Beautiful.

I've seen that & it ain't pretty. Dear God emotions are the wierdest ** things on Earth. They can haul you up and break you down, it all depends on who's holding the strings.

>.

Oh how sad! It obvious that they love each other. Maybe they should date w/o living together. Hassle but maybe it'll get them over the hurdle.

aww sad! :(

The last two lines were ever so beautiful... aw... the whole story was brilliant.

wow, that is so beautiful

*wipes away a tear* It's so sad, but very lovely!

that was deep. you have a knack for deep things

but that was not K, more like T

That...was so sad! How could you?! *burst into tears* But yeah...I can understand the whole "can't live with you, can't live without you" thing...but still! It's really too sad...*bawls*

Wow. Really wonderfully done. The last two lines were beautiful and a perfect way to end it. I greatly admire your style. Thanx for the story.

that is so sadly true. them silly boys...

excellent job with the fic, and i really love the tone it was written in. (something like a "well i guess this is something we've got to live with" tone, i guess... i dunno how to verbalize it correctly.)

so they keep coming back together...lol...