Very good fic!
Thanks for writing, it was a pleasure to read

Very good story... really liked Max's character, reminds me of Harry from the fic "Learning to Breathe". Nice AU. All in all a good job... the only minor irritant was the part where Matrix just popped out of the blue. I'm a matrix fan myself, but somehow found it to be quite corny and annoying.

Odd as it is, I'm snickering at the image of Hermione repeating Ron's exact words to Ginny back to him and the entire ranger core going off one by one like lemmings.

*cracks up laughing!* And Gundam Wing makes it's debut! *sighs* Too bad there's no Duo. Love the story, but seriously, if Ginny don't pull her head out of her ** soon, someone else will snatch up Harry. Hell, she might turn poor Harry off women period... *looks left, looks right* And just to add another hat in the ring for the ships... *waits for it* Harry/Luna was always amusing as well... :}

I have really liked the story line so far, but I have to get this off my chest. It likes reading a damn soap opera. The sub plots detract from the general story line, and its almost onerous to read. I hate to leave a story open ended but its almost more work to read it than relaxing, as it should be. Sorry to be so blunt, but...
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Great story, loved it, but I did like the 1st one best. I'm just about to begin the 3rd one. I'll let you know. Tazz

Idiotic writer, there isn't anything positiv coming out with killing wolfe! I realy loved your story, but this ends right here... I just can't continue reading such a blasted story, it could have workd out all right if you didn't start writing such nice things abouth him in this book, if he was kild in the first scene of this sequel I would probobly been very sad, but the story would be to good to put down... Now, I don't know, you've ruined it for me... And one more thing, I've read around 200 fics, and this is only the seccond fic i'm stopping midway, and the other got rather to slash! But still, your writing skills is good, but this bad choice of yours ruined it for me... Normally I would have continued and hoping for something to bring him back, but this time I don't see the poing!

Good start... But please, more Harry action, it's to much of all the girls just whining and stuff, if all girls are like the girls in this story then i'm going gay! Hehe, well... maybe not... But still, could you tune it down a couple of levels? Well, what am I saying, the story is done... Exellent fic:)

ok, that was a little strange, with Harry dying and coming back to life for the second time. I am grateful that you said in the notes that this was the last time. I'm not sure I would continue reading your story if you wanted to put me through that again.

There were a lot of hints that he wasn't dead - the spell to save Ginny comes to mind.

I think we need to start making something of Ron. His outbursts are beginning to become annoying.

Either kill him off, or please help him to mature?

Thanks!

Heidi? OOPS!

That one will go over like a lead kite. Our hero will probably be wearing some nasty boils, just like his best mate.

Enjoyed the chapter, with the Japanese culture somewhat explained. Wolfe is definitely an interesting character - especially when he kicked Harry's butt!

Thanks for sharing the chapter.

Interesting chapter, what with the vamps, the clans, the pure bloods, and babies - lots to talk about!

I was surprised a bit at how Harry's fame has spread world wide (including Japan). He would never see himself above others.

The interesting take is when a pureblood fanatic meets the wizarding hero, one half-blooded Harry Potter! One can just imagine the conflicts of blood purity and his role as hero.

Wolfe as a romance coach? LOL - that was priceless!

great story, though i can't help ye with whats good and whats not, i think its all brilliant :)

Hello Agent Malfoy!!

"floppy grey wizarding hat that obscured his eyes. He was leaning on heavily on his staff." sounds like another LOTR allusion... Gandalf the awesome!! i mean the Grey. great chapter, but too bad Wolfe had to die.