I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more

chapters?

I like it but I don't think Pan is stronger then Trunks but that is just me. And Trunks has never acted like Vegeta. A little when he was little but not when he got older!

its good but a little too romeo and Juliet ish.

Such a cute love story..;-; like I said, it should so be a movie!

Woaah! Pan's gonna-wait..not gonna spoil it for those who havn't gotten here! ; -reads on!-

This story should so be a movie...;-;..so b-e-a-utiful..;-;...

-sniff sniff- So beautiful..;-;..reading on! -blows her nose with a tissue- poor Panny..;-;..

Kinda..nasty..; BUT! You said only R in the first chapter! And even though I don't really like reading things like that..I don't REALLY (Wish that could be underlined and in italix XD) mind. But anyways, you decribe things very well! Makes you fell like your almost there! Which I'm glad I wasn't but ANYWAYS! Moving on to chapter two!

Oh wow...I've read this story before on another web site...now I remember you_ I loved it then and I love it now!

to lazy to sign in but i really loved your story

i love it

Què fort, aquestes antigues pensava que les tenia, però no...! T'estimo!Què maco és el Breathless... em sembla que t'ho vaig a l'altra review que et vaig escriure, però el primer cop que el vaig llegir, vaig plorar i tot...

You know I was very supriesed at the beginning!...Kiku Ilu

ohhhhhh...

I have only one thing to say... AWWWWW! Ok, I'm done now.